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Reviews for If I Could Change the World

By : suomynonakun
  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2008
    This was a very good story, its so hard to find stories that are this good almost anywhere. Keep writing stories, I'll keep reading.
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  • From ANON - crimson_phoenix on April 25, 2007
    This fic is one of the best I've read, and I thankyou for writing it and brightening the fanfiction world. I look forward to any other fics you decide to write.
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  • From Naxuro on April 10, 2007
    That was one Awesome Story, so dark, so sad, so evil. You should make an Epilogue to this story to tie up some loose ends.
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  • From ANON - Coconut on December 02, 2006
    Its been over a year now since the last update, but I insist apoun you, the author to continue, and follow through with what you started if you still can, what you have here is a wonderful story, that is extremely detailed and in depth, if your reading this yes, it is both a positive review, and a plea, for you to continue this.

    -Coconut
    The Origional
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  • From ANON - DTCleric on September 01, 2006
    Very good story.

    Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - forsaken_fool on August 05, 2006
    All i can really say is: Wow.
    Im really impressed by your writing style and how you build up an origional story using basically only the characters and basic physics of an unorigional world. Im trying to write a story from complete scratch and so far its not turning out too well. I'll reread this story if i find myself written into a corner. Though there are some spots where it seems youve done that, you seem to know how to pull it out.
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  • From ANON - Josh on July 16, 2006
    Hey great story but I wanna know more of the beginning of this story so I can understand it some more. If you want e-mail me at JTB8834@aol.com so you can help fill in the blanks for me and refresh my memory about who everyone is ..... It would be much obliged if you did that and great writing anf hope to see an update
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  • From ANON - Kage-oni on January 25, 2006
    OMG Great story. Loved how you made ash a bad ass. hope u can finish it soon
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  • From BrightShadow on January 06, 2006
    ...wow. Okay, this is easily going on my rec. list. I'm seriously at a loss of words. It's just... damn. *govels and bows profusely*
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  • From ANON - AMAZED on December 29, 2005
    OMG!

    *breathe* *breathe*

    Look... I can't believe it ...

    *crying*

    why did you stop?

    Are you trying to kill me?

    *hiccup*

    UPDATE ALREADY!

    *wiping the rivers of snot and tears from face*

    DON'T

    LEAVE

    ME

    HANGING
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  • From ANON - funkmasterjo on December 23, 2005
    You're pretty good. Though I find it mildly disturbing how easily Ash and Misty get along after that letter. Also, that Misty gets jelous so easily while being able to forgive herself so quickly paints a really shallow picture of her.


    But wow, it's the best work I've seen in Pokemon for a while
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  • From ANON - ViV on December 06, 2005
    Awesome work, i really enjoyed it!
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  • From ANON - hfz on November 29, 2005
    Chapter 10 delivers an astounding plot.
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  • From ANON - Fanficaddict on November 25, 2005
    I think you have a great story going on and i can't wait to see how the battles are going to unfold.
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  • From ANON - Church on November 24, 2005
    THIS STORY PWNS A ACTUAL GOOD ASS POKEMON FIC KEEP GOING DEAR GOD I READ ALL 10 CHAPS IT WAS SO GREAT!!!
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