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Reviews for Nightshift

By : ChibiFenrir
  • From ANON - Xenostriker on June 14, 2005
    This is easily one of the best series of Evangelion Lemon fics I've ever read. The latest chapter was quite refreshing since it featured an Angel (other than Kaworu or Rei). You did have me going at the end since I thought Arael would die like Mana did. But I guess one should never underestimate an Angel, right?
    On a side note, Shadowed Moon may have read this series wrong- from my understanding, each of the chapters is a story in itself and almost totally unconnected with each other like a series of one-shots.
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  • From ANON - Shigoki on June 11, 2005

    Hey man! this chapter was cool, wanna know if you will make a second part.

    GOGOGOGO!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shadowed Moon on June 10, 2005
    I liked this chapter very much, especially the protrayal of the angel. I was a little worried towards the end, though, cause I thought that you'd kill off the Arael. You're right, I did expect another "Mana" to happen. I wonder, though, what's to become of Arael? I mean, it would be great to see her as the one that Shinji'd end up with, but your timeline doesn't seem to have room for that (from the looks of it, he ultimately ends up with Mari).
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  • From ANON - Shadowed Moon on June 10, 2005
    Chapter 7 is...interesting. I didn't dislike it, and I suppose I get your angle, but I didn't see it coming. When you consider the premise, it's kinda cute, how this chapter was executed. Satsuki isn't as brazen as you you wrote her, but eh, it's an Eva fic. At least no tears in this one.
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  • From ANON - Shadowed Moon on June 10, 2005
    I'm at chapter five and I felt that this was a good place to stop and review. I must say that this fic isn't too bad, considering the shit that appears here at AFF. I liked how deeply you portrayed the characters and developed the story, making this a couple of steps above being just another pornfic. Now, it isn't exactly a perfect fic. The most notable problem here is the grammatical, spelling, and punctual mistakes. I recommend a good beta-reader to fix that, hell, E-mail me sometime and I'LL be your beta.. Oh, and this particular chapter made me sad, the ending was expected, but it still hit me pretty hard. If I were a little down, I might've cried. I guess it needed to happen to make logical sense with your established storyline, but I still wished that Mana didn't end up like that...
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  • From ANON - Luky on June 09, 2005
    Awww... the only person he hasn't screwed is poor Rei!!! Think you could make it work? Youve done a great job with the made up characters- very cool! Me likes :-D
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  • From ANON - CF on June 07, 2005
    Many thanks for the reviews everyone. I'm really really thankful that people are even reading. ^_^

    To answer a review that was recently left, I do plan on doing a Mayumi chapter and Kyoko chapter. Kyoko's would probably be Shinji doing something via Unit 02 -> Kyoko and Mayumi's will basically be a rehash of the game since most people don't even know her character. I already planned on doing the teacher chapter too. The only chapters I'm really unsure of are Nozomi's and Yui's.

    The only named female character I can't see happening is Naoko. Thankfully, I didn't exactly hear from any Naoko fans yet. ^_^; Also, a kind person sent an email and I would like to clarify that I am trying hard on Rei's chapter. It's just difficult for me seeing that it is the hardest paring for me to write decently.

    I have some other stories to update/finish also so I might get a bit more laid back on this for a while.

    Again I would like to thank every reviewer and reader.

    CF
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  • From ANON - KC6 on June 07, 2005
    Just asking: will you do a chapter with Mayumi Yamagishi from second impresion game? And about Asuka's mother Kyoko, will she, in some way, apear in a chapter too? and since we are talking about mothers what about Yui and Naoko? And finishing, i believe that cold have an chapter where Shinji would be with a female teacher, since you are using ACCs.
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  • From ANON - Name on June 06, 2005
    I just read Chapter 9, "Remembrance," and I have decided this is worthwhile.

    Ritsuko is probably my single favorite character from NGE. And you made it in character and almost believable for her to have sex with Shinji. I'm impressed.

    Mind you, I'm not sure Shinji is in character here. Even for teenage boys, in mourning != horny. Shinji howling in rage and throwing himself at the Mass Production EVAs, then self-destructing when his power levels ran out, would be in character. This "Hmm, the woman who deflowered me, the one true love of my life and the only reason I don't stick my head in the oven, is dying if not already dead. I know, I'll fuck her best friend!" isn't. I don't think even Kaji would do that.

    Nonetheless the sex is hot, and anything with Ritsu gets bonus points from me, unless she is, you know, crazy or dying or something.

    So, ten out of ten for style, minus several million for credible characterization, +10 Ritsu bonus.
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  • From Mic123 on June 06, 2005
    Very good, you need the next chapter to finish/ continue with the same charicters and parings seemd like it wasn't over with them, so continue with this chapter 10 idea, worked well, although you could have wrote a seperate story for this chapter, oh well it was very good none the less, I loved it
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  • From ANON - Jebus on June 04, 2005
    Once again, you win the internet! :D
    That was incredibly hot. o:

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  • From ANON - Shard on June 03, 2005
    Forgot to mention I really liked the character of Areal. The original character design you made I think worked much better than if you used a female version of Koaru.
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  • From ANON - Shard on June 03, 2005
    What a twist. At first I thought it a little odd that the angel be the love intrest in chapter 10, but after I started reading into it I loved it, and I know these are one shots but I would love it if you could continue this one. Anyway hope to read more of your great work soon.
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  • From ANON - A person on June 03, 2005
    DAMN, you're a really good writer. I wish i was half as good as you. Anyways, MAKE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well, i could keep that up but you get the idea. :-P
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  • From ANON - warpwizard on June 02, 2005
    Another good one. Smooth as silk. A couple of errors though: snuggly should be "snugly", tolerate of other should be "tolerant of another", and a couple of others I've forgotten. Keep 'em coming and thanks.
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