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Reviews for Nightshift

By : ChibiFenrir
  • From amimajime on October 03, 2007
    N i c e - dude! This whole series of Shinji doing all these things is really interesting. I like how every chapter is a one-shot with alternate realities all around. Its almost like a "Shinji's Black Book Chronicle" thing and its great to see him interact and finally get the girl he meets in bed somehow everytime. I like the different takes/possibilities you took on this character, and for the first day checking it out I read straight through some chapters for a few hours. I haven't read everything yet, but wow it has left an impression and I'll be getting to it. Thanks for putting so much effort into this - its amazing. I'll review once I read everything
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  • From St. Tabris on March 03, 2007
    "Untitled..."
    It NEEDS a title...
    Such as...
    "Mama's Boy."
    This one's a keeper. I listened to Blue October's "Hate Me" while I read it.
    But still I wonder...is she Yui, Unit 01, or possibly both?
    Cree-py.
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  • From AsukaAndShinjiForever on February 17, 2007
    I liked the fact you managed to work in Kaji's killer. ^_^
    Best line EVER, because it's true (Hell, I'm a girl so I know. ^_~):
    “I thought girls didn’t watch stuff like that…” Akemi shrugged as she pushed the video tape in, “Don’t believe that shit. I probably haven’t thought much about it but girls think about this just as much as boys do.” Fufufu.
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  • From Ominae on February 06, 2007
    Dangit! This was another cool chapter. I honestly thought Naoko was up next...

    I'll be giving out some suggestion on what the next chapters should be.
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  • From ANON - 94saturn on January 11, 2007
    I just read chapter 1 and liked it.

    The way you started and ended with a sex scene was interesting. This is an unusual Hikari character, secretes and cheating, along with rough casual sex. On the one hand she seems to be using both men as “boy toys”. Yet the character seems to be deeper with issues that she needs to resolve. At the rate she is going she, would, get pregnant raising the question “whose is it”?

    I’ll keep reading as time permits.

    DC (AKA 94saturn)

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  • From ANON - Sailor Star Dust on December 28, 2006
    The pairing wasn't exactly my cup of tea and it bothered me to see you killed off Asuka (sob) (as well as Misato-san!) but the chapter itself was written well. So I guess you're gonna do a chapter each with Shinji having sex with all 3 women inside each Evas? Just so you know, the soul inside zerogoki (Unit 0) is Rei I, NOT that nonsense of Ritsuko's mother. I really hope that stupid rumor would just die. Several series facts show this: Episode 14: when Shinji is inside Unit 0, he feels Rei's peresence the last thing he sees is Rei I, looking creepy as she floats toward him. Rei I goes beresk and tries to kill Ritsuko for revenge: Naoko killed her. Episode 23/23', when Rei II is being attacked by the 16th Angel: "Who is it? Me? The Me inside Eva? No, something else." It seems like each of these chapters are stand-alone, which I personally think is an excellent way to write something like this. ^_^
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  • From ANON - crash and burn on December 20, 2006
    and as allways a great story.
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  • From ANON - CF on December 20, 2006
    Thanks, can you email me concerning that though or leave the name or the story and the site it's on? I can see if it's Remember Me but I've only seen four stories making Kyoko a main character including mine. Hope no one just didn't straight up take the chapter though, takes me months to write this stuff sadly enough. ;_;
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  • From Stalcup on December 20, 2006
    Ok this might sound wierd but I've read this chapter somewhere before and it's up to like three chapters now. If it's you cool it makes a good story if not I thought you should know.Later
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  • From ANON - warpwizard on December 18, 2006
    Chapter 16 - Eternal

    Nice writing. Story didn't seem to have as much of a point as your usual, but it was still fun to read. Thanks for writing. :)
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  • From ANON - JWM on December 14, 2006
    Cute chapter, I really am impressed by how you're able to build an entire chapter out of characters that barely are shown in the show.
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  • From ANON - Kaldra on December 11, 2006
    another revival from the dead.
    good stuff as always. hope real life calms down and we see more of you around here.
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  • From ANON - Church on December 08, 2006
    Nice update. I liekd the new chappy nad who knew the next girl would be asukas mom? Your ending always leave me thinking and wishing there was much more but they are very well done and thought out. Good job dude
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  • From ANON - cdog21 on December 08, 2006
    I have really enjoyed this series, but up until these last two it was just a regular "Oh that's nice" kinda thing. But with this one and the one with Yui I can honestly say that they were very enjoyable. I think the fact that you used these characters in such a way is what made it better for me, I mean with all the talk about Unit 00,01, and 02 housing the souls of Yui, Kyoko, and Naoko you think it would be used more often, but I can honestly say that I have only read two other fics that had Yui (especially Yui) and Kyoko interacting with Shinji or anybody else whether in a sexual way or as a mother looking after her children, which was the case in one story on ff.net that had all three speaking to their children. So keeping in this train of thought how about one more ghost story before you go to something else.
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  • From ANON - ? on December 06, 2006
    Nice
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