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Reviews for Nightshift

By : ChibiFenrir
  • From ANON - Kyle on September 03, 2006
    I really like this stories- not so much for the sex as for the pure emotiong and feeling in each one of them. Even if the writing isn't that great, and the sex is a bit sub-par, I still find myself being drawn into each and every one of the plots. I think you capture the more dramatic feel of the show perfectly, despite a few instances of OOC behavior. The romance here might actually be better without sex on occasion, because some of them are so touching that the smut seems a bit tacked on and don't serve much of a purpose, but of course, if you had done that, then you wouldn't have posted the story on this site. I think you've done a great job creating some truly fine romance here, and i'm enjoying it very much.
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  • From ANON - no name eva fan on September 01, 2006
    loved the Shinji/Ritsuko and Shinji/Arael chapterts. really think you should continue chapter 10's story. and as for a Shinji/Naoko fic? if any one can make it work its you man. I can't seem to find many Shinji/Ritsuko fics out there.
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  • From ANON - Sideris on August 20, 2006
    Keep up the fantastic work!
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  • From ANON - Simon on August 17, 2006
    So far, chapter 11 is my favorite. I think you should continue that story. At least write about the day after.
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  • From ANON - Church on August 17, 2006
    awesomness that update was geat dude and well thought out but I wanted some more it was sad it had to end that way
    but its work from a badass like yourself and I mean dat in a good way. Later and Rock on Dude.
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  • From ANON - Carlos on August 07, 2006
    Amazing. Story #15...
    Truly, absolutely spectacular. I love the series, please continue it...! You know... If you feel like it. o.o
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  • From ANON - crash and burnn on August 07, 2006
    i really like these storys. can you make another shinji/asuka one again please.
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  • From ANON - Konous the Grey on August 06, 2006
    Dear Chibi Fenirir,

    Excellent story. So Unit 01 as a being, not as a machine, was created by the maternal instincts of Yui. Nice, a lot better than I thought it would be. And actually I'm really glad you wrote it, I've always wanted to see a Shinji/Unit 01 story. I mean come on, the thing has the Soul of Yui but it has it's own thoughts as well no? If you rewrite one the chapters, by all means friend do it! It's your work, change it, cut it up, tear it to pieces until you're satisfied with it.

    Take care I can't wait to see the rest.

    Sincerely,

    Konous the Grey
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  • From ANON - Takun on August 04, 2006
    I absolutely love this series. I have so many fav pairings, ShinxMaya, ShinxMisato, ShinxRei, ShinxMana, Shinxetc, heh, and no matter what theres always an excellent, well-writtain scene in this series for them all. Just wondering, do you take ideas? I couldnt submit a request, it'd be another Shinxmaya or something, hehe, but just wondering, have you ever given any thoughts to the female security staff? Theres no telling if Section 9 had any female members, or any of the security officers.
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  • From ANON - warpwizard on August 02, 2006
    Chapter 15: Excellent work. I can see how it would be hard to write. :)
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  • From ANON - Archimedeas on August 02, 2006
    I just read the latest chapter. I just have to ask, man...What are you doing? What are you doing here? I mean you're writing this trandscendental, fucking mind/heart/madness-expanding shit and I just can't understand it. I mean this is brilliant. This is the human condition; the eternal sunshine of the spotless mind. I'm not just buttering you up, either; normally I neither love nor hate fanfiction authors. I just don't care. My apathy is so powerful I cannot even bring myself to type up a derisive remark in a review of a bad piece of writing. But this is so...I don't even care about the sex. I mean it furthers the story, but in a way that's a fucking galaxy past normal romance. I don't know what to tell you. I mean I've read Kafka, Bukowski, Fante and Milton and I can say without even a trace of undue charity that if your writing was in a paperback, I'd buy it.

    Keep it up. Write some original stuff, too. And when you do let me know. I'm keeping an eye on you. Goddamn am I keeping an eye on you.
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  • From ANON - Archimedeas on August 02, 2006
    Hot fucking dog, you updated! I love you, you son of a bitch!
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  • From ANON - Ominae on August 01, 2006
    Sure was expecting this, but not expecting a vision of Yui doing the you know what with Shinji...

    Even if it wasn't what I liked (Sorry, am that picky!), am glad that a Shinji/Yui story was there. Thanks, comrade. Maybe I'll dream that another one will be done soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ominae on July 23, 2006
    Pardon for reviewing you again, but I'm currently anticipating for the Shinji/Yui story!
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  • From ANON - you know who on July 23, 2006
    is it just me or is the "Nurse" The love child of Asuka and Misato. Any way GREAT stories so far and I cannot WAIT unitl you update.

    Ja Ne
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