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Reviews for Nightshift

By : ChibiFenrir
  • From ANON - Archimedeas on July 13, 2006
    Hurrah! I'm glad to hear you haven't abandoned the story.

    If I may make a suggestion, I feel it'd be pretty cool if some of the chapters involved Shinji 'being with' two women at a time, if you catch my visual gist. I admit this is also a thinly veiled attempt by me to get you to lengthen the series so I get so see more of your writing.
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  • From ANON - CF on July 12, 2006
    Thanks for the support everyone. I've been really busy lately but I'm sure I'll be able to update in a while. The main reason for the pause was the lack of writing I did while the site was technically down and reason is simply because I can't really predict how people will take the next chapter but it's all good. ^_^;

    Just a matter of actually getting some time to write now but I know I won't stop till I'm finished. If I can't finish Nightshift then I'll never be able to finish or even start another story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2006
    When are you going to start writing again, man? I love this series.
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  • From ANON - Livin' Ghost on June 25, 2006
    I read these stories, and i have to say that the plots of your stories were the most realistic I have seen. Cant wait to see your next one.
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  • From ANON - ??? on February 19, 2006
    what, no penis sucking
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  • From ANON - Gendo-Chan! on February 13, 2006
    Woo, another great chapter. I like the brief but pivotal role of Gendo, he helps Shinji because instead of being the spineless wimp who dosen't try, who dosen't attempt, Shinji finally shows his desire/ambition for more. Great little twist on Gendo's character, the father who dosen't know how to show love, but pushes the son until the son pushes back. Resulting in less spineless son o.O
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  • From ANON - Drool on February 13, 2006
    I just had a fap-fest during my reading marathon... On another note, since I can't find any criticism other than the grammatical mistakes.... *Begins to worship CF*
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  • From ANON - IamGod on February 07, 2006
    I'm never one to leave reviews for fics I read, but I'm willing to make an exception. You're a great writer, you probably know that already, but I just can't say it enough. I usually find NC-17 fics tasteless and the only reason I visit this site is coz of my hopes of finding fics that give graphic description of fight scenes, all that gore and stuff, which is usually toned down or censored in most fanfic sites. Luckily, I read this compilation of amazing standalones. I'm impressed on how much detail you provide so as to give life to your characters, you don't simply skip to the hot-steamy sex just for the sake of writing one. You invest enough emotions to each of them so that when it comes to the rater-R stuff, your readers can't help but appreciate the physical connection you're trying to create between Shinji and the other female characters. I'm also floored with how able you are with maintaining Shinji in-character despite the unusual situations you place him in - Shinji getting in a intimate relationship with a female is highly unlikely to happen in the show but the way you write his reactions, emotions are enough to make me believe otherwise, even for just a short time. The endings are also very impressive, each one is in a league of its own. My favorite so far has been 'Discord'. I hope you write a sequel to that.

    Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up! Post more soon.
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  • From ANON - Nona on February 04, 2006
    Marvelous, simply marvelous! Chapter 14 I really like. I find your OC's are the better chapters, now that I think about it...
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2006
    Chapter 14 was fucking boring dude. A literal snoozefest. It really wasn't up to your usual standard.
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on February 03, 2006
    Hmm, great one-shot as always, but I wonder what all that about Gendos arm was. His arm was off? Did he already do that wierd thing with Rei in Terminal Dogma where his hand gets clipped off? If that is so, shouldn't he, and everyone else besides Shinji have had their AT fields opened?

    Kinda confusing, but all in all, high quality fiction as always from you man, hehe, nurses...

    Oh, and also, I'm really happy to hear that Arael was one of your chosen to continue her timeline, even though you did say it was Ritsuko that gets first priority. Really liked Sentient, I still read it from time to time.
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  • From ANON - CF on February 03, 2006
    Ah, when I said next to last chapter I meant that, aside from the next made up character, that the rest of the chapters should feature characters named in the series. ^_^;; To clarify, Contact is the next to last chapter to have an original character. I still have a lot of characters left to deal with. Here is an updated list if that means anything to you.

    Asuka
    Rei
    Section 2 Agent
    Yui (Yeah... ~_~)
    Naoko (Loving on the MAGI just a bit too much. ~_~)
    Kyoko
    Nozomi
    Mayumi (I probably should start looking for a Second Impression guide. ~_~)

    It's a good thing I've waited to deal with most of those characters because I already know they have the most difficult chapters to write not to mention that I don't have much to work with in some cases. I feel like I'm forgetting something important but it'll come to me later. I know I sound redundant but I'm really trying my best and, when I think I can't write a chapter, these reviews prove to me that I can. Also, I don't mind hearing what you want to say at all. ^_^ That's what reviews are for and, with that, back to writing. >_< I hope people are cool with the next chapter. o.o
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  • From ANON - Ominae on February 02, 2006
    You updated fast! I can't believe it! First thing that I wanna say is that my heart kinda broke while I was reading the chapter. I can understand how Chikaru must have felt when she finds out that her husband's backstabbing her.

    This is the 2nd to the last chapter? Man, there are some people worth mentioning here (No guys, I won't repeat the list) from the EVA series. Though this is not meant to rant you or anything, I just feel that some people should be here as well.

    Dropping the ranting down, nice chapter. Really liked it.
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on February 02, 2006
    another fantastic chapter. Its a delight seeing you update because i know that your updates are each an original piece of evangelion fanfiction and that for a little while I can be free of all those lame cliches :)
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  • From ANON - Bansei on February 02, 2006
    I really enjoy this little short collection.

    ... I almost wish every chapter could become their own story. I remember stumbling across it a while ago and opening it for more vulgar reasons, but once I got to reading... I've been addicted to romance for a while now, so I guess it was only natural I got attached to the endings you gave these shorts. I sorely want more out of them (discluding the mechanic, but...), yet they seem complete in their own way.

    Thank you for a wonderful writing style.
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