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Reviews for Nightshift

By : ChibiFenrir
  • From ANON - Bubbles on August 06, 2005
    Great chapter, one of the best yet.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2005
    omg! continue the last chapter! >.
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  • From ANON - Cockweed McDickle on August 05, 2005
    Chapter 12 pretty much sucked. It didn't feel realistic at all. Mana wouldn't "come home" like that for any reason at all if she had any common senseor consideration, not to mention some other things that were quirky.* Basically this chapter felt contrived in ways, and also, the sex scene was extremely lacking. You could have put more effort into it considering that it's the reason you post these on AFF. To top it off, the ending felt gimmicky and predictably unpredictable (if you know what I mean), like it was done purely for "shock" value (being that normally such an occurrence as happened in this chapter's ending would not be the case in any reality). The plot concept in this chapter is more fitting for something of a longer composition, a multi-chapter spin-off perhaps. You tried to cram way too many feelings, half-developed idea, and other things into a short chapter. It just didn't work this time around.


    *For example, no matter how hard you study it takes longer than 3 years to become a doctor of any sort, medical or otherwise.
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on August 05, 2005
    ..... I think I'll sum my review in one word, taken from the scene of End of Evangelion directly after Shinji strangles the imaginary Asuka.

    The word is, speechless.

    Please disregard that Shinji screams his head off afterward
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  • From ANON - Knightsabre09 on August 05, 2005
    That last chapter was one of the most depressing things I've ever read. Right before I went to bed too. Damn :( Oh well, still great stuff, can't wait for more.
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  • From BrianChattillon on August 05, 2005
    The Chapter Paridise.
    A bittersweet chapter and very well written Congrats!
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  • From ANON - JErosion on August 05, 2005
    hmmm so are all of these just a one on one thing or will shinji get a three-some. If he's lucky enough maybe somehting odd with Hikari and Rie or Nozomi Horaki and Mari Suzuhara.... hmmm the joy
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  • From ANON - Axed on August 04, 2005
    But.. Rei, like Asuka etc. gets a second chapter, doesn't she?

    >:D
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  • From ANON - soul ice on August 04, 2005
    this is flatley amazing i hope you continue i realy hope you make another mana chapter that isnt sad bolth of her apperences have been followed by tragey.
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  • From ANON - guyver11984 on August 03, 2005
    Wow is all i can say, S/R is my favorite pairing and this chapter did do it justice. While i would have loved a happy ending, the way you chose to end it was very emotional and I hope you do more S/R fics in the future.
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  • From ANON - Mr. Pointy on August 03, 2005
    The Rei story was incredible.
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  • From ANON - JWM on August 03, 2005
    Wow. You are possibly the only writer I've ever seen that can write a sad fic that I can enjoy. That you're a lemon writer makes it even more amazing. Please don't stop writing, that would be a true tragedy.
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  • From ANON - AlexAzure on July 21, 2005
    I really like these stories strictly because they are so unique and there are plenty of ACCs for ppl like me who love them. Then you also have other characters who were actually in the series, which gives it more realism. This is honestly, one of the better fanfics out there. I dislike Shinji x Asuka, but you made me at least read it, you get alot points for that story as well, keep on updating!
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  • From ANON - Alpha X on July 12, 2005
    GOOD, GREAT, EXCELLENT, BUT WHERE IS REI?
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on July 12, 2005
    All these chapters and your ACCs are great, unbelieveably good work, they are real works of art... But...... But.....


    *chanting* GIVE US REI! GIVE US REI! GIVE US REI! GIVE US REI! GIVE US REI! GIVE US REI! GIVE US REI! GIVE US REI!
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