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By : Marlingrl
  • From ANON - Peacemaker on May 22, 2005
    Another two great chapters, Keep up the good work because I like this story a lot. Please update when you have time.
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  • From ANON - omega arts on May 03, 2005
    oh my god! did he actually kill?? such big twists of please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - InuMiko on March 19, 2005
    Ugh.

    How could you do that to Kenshin?

    Ugh.

    It's well written, but I can't stand it... horrible, horrible, horrible.
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  • From Lin on March 17, 2005
    Alas... so I have reached the end....... it is grievous...
    update... (I know.. I'm a good one to talk)

    Respectfully,
    Tsuki-san
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  • From Lin on March 17, 2005
    Old Friends........

    What a bastard! That's all I have to say.
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  • From Lin on March 17, 2005
    YEEECH! How did I know that was going to happen?
    Not nice, not nice... but at least I don't have to wait
    for the update... he he he he he

    I know, I know... You'll get me later.

    Tsuki
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  • From Lin on March 17, 2005
    The best one so far... now I really want them to end up together.

    And I see my beloved Lere is also reviewing you. It's like old
    home room... I should have come over here ages ago. Sessha
    begs your humble pardon for not partaking of your talent before.



    Tsuki-san
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  • From Lin on March 17, 2005
    Kewlness... Dana (Sephiress) already told you about the dialogue thing...
    I should have known... she's the best, isn't she? She's one of my babies. Love that
    girl.

    Great chappie!! The whole this is breaking my heart... I have a horrible thing to admit...
    I am actually wanting Kenshin and Miorya (sp?) to end up together... shhhhhhhhhhh,
    don't tell anybody... I think I'd get assassinated.

    Love you, girly
    Tsuki-san
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  • From Lin on March 17, 2005
    Okay... I have to stop and drop a review... I couldn't break away until now.
    This is wicked and... different isn't the word. This is... painful, but, oh what
    a way to go. I can't stop. I can see I'm going to have to read the whole thing.
    I didn't have anything else planned.

    Another word of advice... watch out for repeating words in sentence groups.
    You don't do it very often, but it is there. Also, you really should seperate
    you dialogue. Each character is supposed to have their own paragraph when
    speaking. Proper structure allows for only one character to speak within one
    paragraph at a time... even if it is only one sentence or phrase. This is a rule
    of grammar... not a bitchy old woman. :)

    God Bless...
    Tsuki-san
    Off to read more......poof
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on March 06, 2005
    Wow, you really got me hooked on this. When is the next update? Wonderfull story. Love how you torture Kenshin.
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  • From ANON - twishinky on March 02, 2005
    you have a beautiful story and i will wait anxiously til your next update. :)
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  • From ANON - Wow on February 26, 2005
    This is great! Can't wait to read the rest of the story!
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  • From on February 24, 2005
    I am loving this story so much! I can't wait to read more! ^_^
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  • From ANON - MusashiTheLegendarySamurai on February 24, 2005
    This is the best fanfic i have ever read. Period. It is gritty, and dark, but keeps to the personality of the charachters perfectly. I LOVE your writing style, and I cant wait for the next chapter. Kenshin is such a tortured soul, i really hope he can find happiness with Kaoru. We alll love them so much! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Mauzkateer on February 16, 2005
    Dear Marlingrl,

    I'm enjoying reading this. The description of the chamber where Kenshin and Miyori are being held has a parallel in the Three Musketeers - did you intend that? I will be interested in seeing where this is going - some sort of "breeding program" perhaps?
    As for your comments on my own work at FF.net, yes, I indeed am old enough to read this sort of fiction. Hell, I remember when Robert Redford didn't have any wrinkles! (Ha!) Take care and keep writing!

    Mauzkateer Aka Jay R.

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