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Reviews for Whispers

By : EdensEpitaph
  • From ANON - Nickie on January 12, 2005
    Good lemon. Your language and descriptions are pretty good, and don't worry too much about crazy reviewers who only know how to complain. I understand what you mean when you get mad at people who are native speakers of "x" language and start criticizing you when actually, it seems that they're worse than you are. Just ignore them, my dear, they're not worthy of your breath or words.

    Now, on the other hand, as for improving your writing, I - myself - am not an English native speaker; however, I found some tiny mistakes throughout the story... I think they're typos more than anything. Nonetheless, so you're aware, sometimes genders and pronouns are confused. Eg: her instead of he, his instead of her, etc. As I said, I think they're just typos. Also, I think the right way to spell "lack" is as shown, and not "lake." The latter would be lake, as for Superior Lake. ^^

    Be happy and forget crazy people, and sometimes I include myself in this group. Take care.
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  • From ANON - Jane on January 11, 2005
    good fic
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  • From ANON - anubis on January 11, 2005
    AMEN sister! ^_^ as fic writer I know how difficult it is at begining and even more when you're not a native speaker (must confess I once recieve so many flames I even decided to burn y fics... don't regreted but I can still read those awful words T_T) . Anywho, on to the story, what can I say, I really liked it, love the lyrism in it that and I'm a big KxK fan, I don't think you were to ooc, so keep up with the good work and the late hours writing because although one receive bad reviews there are so fans out there who will appreciate our work. Anubis
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  • From ANON - battousai69 on January 11, 2005
    Awesome story. The plot of the fic more than made up for any errors I may have noticed.
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  • From ANON - Lere on January 11, 2005
    What a beautiful lemon! I love it! It's like the old times when we could find many wonderful authors and incredible stories. These days there are few who are capable of doing a fine job about RK lemons. I loved the dialogs. Tasteful and very romantic. The characters weren't OOC. I could see Watsuki's Kenshin and Kaoru perfectly!

    Please, I would like to read more of your great texts... soon!

    Big hugs from Brazil!

    Lere
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