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Reviews for Surrender

By : Masami
  • From Aura4 on April 10, 2005
    Im all tingly with warm fuzzies ^_^ This is a really cute story as well as thoughtful. I like the way that the story comes together in the end, everything is wrapped up nicely.
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  • From ANON - Crimson Blade on January 14, 2005
    This is.....how do I say this....too....short. It's just plain short. It's a good idea, but it needs more body too it, it looks like its only a page or two long....you also need to work on your sentences and grammer. It's just plain choppy. It's. Like. This. See. What. I. Mean? Other than that, your idea is a good one and you use good words (instead of 3rd grade words). I like it, but like I said before, the choppy-ness and the shortness bug me. Alot.

    *ahem*

    *makes poor attempt at promoting her story* Read Numb, it's a goooooooood story! Read Numb, I wrote it and it's gooooooooood! *kills birds with singing* *blinks* oops....^^
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