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Reviews for Blackout

By : bsmartfanfic
  • From Psychostorm on June 29, 2005
    Well if I were Shinji I would have thrown Asuka over the rail and watched her splatter all over the sidewalk right after I blew my load. Or better yet, maybe she would hit a passing car, that would be sweet! Next I would have raped Misato like the whore she is then fucked PenPen for good measure. Also, its a bit annoying when authors say they suck when they really don't, have a little self confidence for crying out loud. The fic was great, none of that stupid romance bullshit, just animalistic fucking.
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  • From ANON - Michael on June 28, 2005
    THIS WAS A FUCKING ASOME SUMIT IF YOU CAN WRITE THE 2CH! PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Shuriko on May 27, 2005
    Excellent fanfic, just like sex it starts with tension, builds foreplay and finishes with a climax. The weakest point might be the inner dialogue where Shinji and Asuka keep on trying to fool themselves to the extreme. I mean if Shinji is a sexy beast and Askuka knows it - why not acknowledge the fact?
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  • From ANON - LordTora on May 19, 2005
    I enjoyed reading this fic, and despite what you say it's really good, i have read REALLY bad fics and this isn't one of them
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  • From Mike256bit on May 15, 2005
    Double-damn, baby. I was a little concerned at first -- the prose fumbles a little here and there, and there are run-ons everywhere. But you've got a serious knack for natural dialogue and shoot if that weren't some hotness! You *know* that's how Asuka likes it. Let's face it. Nice job!
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  • From ANON - matttman on April 29, 2005
    yo i think its great that you have the charators stay in character and do a second please ...
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  • From ANON - LBH on April 08, 2005
    I agree with most reviews here. this one was great
    I've read a lot on AFF and few have as well done a plot AND a well done lemon in there.
    please continue and for all that it is an...{can't think of a good word for arousing} idea...Shinji and Misato should never be together because he really sees her as a surrogate mother...she teases him but still.
    me I like Shinji Rei but this worked and that is good enough for me. Hell I found the same thing with HermionexDraco...wierd but right
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  • From ANON - WulfWere on March 18, 2005
    woah. badass. dude, the characters actually seemed to be in character, if they were put into this situation, you described how i would think that they acted. j00 r0x0rz.
    keep going with the second chapter, i beg of you. i actually read these things because most of the people who write them have talent, and i enjoy good writing. which you do.
    keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - God Of Hentai on March 09, 2005
    Dude, this story is the best fucking Eva lemon I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Hope there's a follow up with Shinji/Misato/Asuka/ ;)
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  • From ANON - Fleur on March 05, 2005
    it was really nice!!!kinda long but it was worth it!!!^_~ just don't put in the threesome!!!pls don't!stick with shinji&asuka!!!!and create another chappy!!!YAY!!!i hope you will,,,i'll be waiting for that!!!see ya!!!^_^
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  • From oldwolf on February 09, 2005
    Pretty good story to date. I hope to see this continued.
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  • From ANON - code_wyze on February 06, 2005
    That was actually really good. You did a very good job of setting up the characters and the mood, and the sexual tension was really thick and well done. I liked the way you had Asuka want to be dominated, and I wouldn't really mind reading the "raping" of Misato... =D~
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on February 01, 2005
    I think what shiji said during this chapter was totaly right 'I never expected it to happen this way' Wow this was so different from any other fic ive ever read!...I must say i liked it alot too... :)
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  • From ANON - Eva Unit-U on February 01, 2005
    Loved it, one of the better stories in AFF's Eva section. Most fics don't have too much of a plot, just random fucking, you did a great job on the storyline, I hope to see another work from you soon.
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  • From ANON - XtAsEe on January 31, 2005
    Nice, good skills, verrrrrry well done in my POV. Keep writing more
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