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Reviews for Moth to the Flame

By : shuen
  • From AkitoSouma on February 03, 2007
    I like this. It's cute. And Ayame's reaction to being raped, feeling that he had to prove himself as a man by conquering a woman sexually, was very psychologically realistic. So was Tohru's reaction--becoming romantically attached to the man who had taken her viriginity although that's the only thing that happened between them. Akito's thoughts are interesting as well. He is clearly not in a healthy state of mind, wanting to be dominant and yet feeling guilty for it. This is all very interesting to me. Please update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Alexial on January 13, 2007
    OMG! I Love it! It's sooo awesome!!!!! Please write more!!! I read all ten chapters in one sitting! I cant wait for the next update! A+++++++
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  • From ANON - sdfgh on October 29, 2006
    Have I reviewed this? Can't remeber but it's my second time reading it^^ please update soon! Pretty please? don't wanna sound like a nag but I just really luv this story
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  • From ANON - dfghjk on October 29, 2006
    Have I already reviewed this? I can't remember but it's the second time I've read it... please update soon...! Pretty please, don't wanna sound like a nag but I just really luv this story
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  • From ANON - Mellas on January 03, 2006
    WHAA I love it!!! Your way of writing keeps me so totally hooked to the story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2005
    interesting...
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on November 12, 2005
    screams:::::::::: Why haven't you updated?! My world is crumbling! You must update as soon as possible. I just love the way you portray Ayame and Akito! Who would have guessed that this pairing had so much potential! PLEASE UPDATE!
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on November 11, 2005
    Hello. It is I again. Just sending you another review to remind you of how egarly I await for a new chapter. I hope you update soon!
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on November 04, 2005
    I really like this story. I never thought I could get into this pairing but you have proven me wrong! I am hooked like a fish and I need more. I like the way you portray Akito and Ayame and how stayed close to their character. Akito is just to HOT so it only makes sense that he would be with Ayame. I personally think that Akito should be the uke and have Ayame become the seme because it seems like Ayame is going through the whole domination worry. When you mentioned how Akito wouldn't mind having Ayame take him I was like, (OH HELL YES! THE STRONG MUST BECOME UKES! LET THE SNAKE LOVER BE THE DOMINATE ONE!)

    Well I hope you update as soon as possible. Please don't leave me hanging!
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  • From ANON - Shintotchi on October 16, 2005
    Oh man! No! You can't stop there! I'm even more enraptured by the story now! Aw and that was so kind of Toohru, I'm really glad about how you characterized her, and Ayame. This is really good. Please continue. ^^
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  • From ANON - Shintotchi on October 16, 2005
    O_O Wow...that was really mean. And I bet Ayame would be the one to believe that too. Man...good job. More ne?
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  • From ANON - Klebkat on September 21, 2005
    UPDATE!

    and it better be soon. *growls at you*
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  • From ANON - Klebkat on August 07, 2005
    *goes to ch. 10. Reads*

    Kleb: OO!! Holy...when the hell did Aya and Tohru start laying each other????

    *Goes and clicks ch. 9*

    Kleb: *laughs* Oh, ha, you updated with two more chapters after 8. Oops. I was thinking ch 9 was the last one that I read. O_O Akito/Tohru/Aya? Damn, that would be hot, let alone if it's just Akito and Tohru. Akito's creepy enough.

    XD
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  • From ANON - kupo on June 30, 2005
    Dude, I'm like WTF I can't believe they did that. (I did like the lemon though) I'm glad u update so soon!!
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  • From ANON - kupo on June 29, 2005
    Geez About time you updated! ( I don't mean that in a bad way) But sereously it has been a while. Anyway U left us at another cliffhanger!! OMFG!! Is he really gonna do Tohru??!!
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