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Reviews for Temptation\'s Desire

By : dragonphire99
  • From ANON - Booze Hound on May 12, 2005
    Ive traveled the universe in search of two hot men like Dee and Ryo. Unfortunately, Neptune was full of transvestites, Venus just had floating pussies, and Mars had dogs with giant cocks. You mean to tell me all this time the hot, passionate men are on EARTH?! Well, hot diggity, im gonna grab myself a bottle of Jack, saddle up the spaceship, and jerk off until I get to Earth.
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  • From ANON - Bard\'s Apprentice on May 09, 2005
    *fangirling, intense clapping & jumping, gobbets & streams of drool fly everywhere*

    i'm SOOOOOO HAPPY u finished it!!! XD *crying* u had me on the edge of my couch, i seriously didn't know how u were going to end it, even right up to the end there. ^_^
    AWESOME!
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  • From ANON - arora_kayd on May 09, 2005
    eee. yay. happy ending. very nice story! thanks for sharing it.
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  • From ANON - ro_buddi on May 03, 2005
    Wow, the final conclusion. I thought that after the 2nd chapter, where the wings are gray, they'd be a little more upset. But they just treat it as dandy, a reflection of their love .... AWWW. I loved the judgement scene, however, I think it told a lot about heirachy and how goes it in the Feilds nad all. Though after Dee and Ryo discover that they're both immortal, it ends rather abruptly. I felt that couyld have been extended a little more, given more weight. Oh well, it was still good. Just where did Ryo's life force go? *shrug* Add a short euilogue, where they live in a village by the sea or something, a plac ewhere they can be happy :-)
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  • From ANON - Scottish Wish on April 26, 2005
    That was so good. I don't typically read angel fics but my friend recommended this to me and Im impressed. Good job!
    Wind to thy wings!
    Scottish Wish
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  • From ANON - 19 on April 17, 2005
    that was really sad at the end, but i was so happy when they bolth came back. it was beautifully written.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 17, 2005
    Dee and Ryo passed and did become immortal! I'm so happy!! Excellent job!!
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  • From ANON - Jhon Doe on April 17, 2005
    This story was simply incredible! First I cried in sadness than in happiness you have a very creative imagination. I hope to see some more of your fanfiction.
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  • From ANON - Kat on April 17, 2005
    that was the most beautiful fanfic ive ever read. it was the one thing ive read that isnt lacking passion. Please keep writing because u could definetly choose writer as your career. thanks for making an actual fanfic.
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  • From ANON - Breathlees_night on April 05, 2005
    WOah!!!! I LOVE IT =) =)

    It´s was so cute and tender, and sexy... Is it the end? =)

    You must write more Fake stuff!!! great job
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  • From ANON - Ro on March 16, 2005
    Oh wow... Ryo's a bold little angel, isn't he? Manga Ryo is soo sensative and shy... But now that his wings are gray, where will he go? Earth is dangerous and he can't go to Hades... Can he? Will Berkley Rose be there? Mwahahaa. I loved it, seriously. Plz email me when you've updated!
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  • From ANON - Booze Hound on March 10, 2005
    Ryo is gorgeous, Dee is hot, unfortunately the booze hound is not. He has no worries, nor any fears b/c he knows sex comes after many beers. He wants Ryo's cock and Dee's nipples, but dont worry, he isnt too fickle.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 08, 2005
    That was so beautiful!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Leah on March 08, 2005
    Beatiful..just..amazing
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 08, 2005
    Great chapter you have here. I felt that the love scene was pulled and stretched out though I did enjoy the chapter. Even though I feel that way I don't believe that you did not overkill like other artist have the feeling to do. I cant wait to see how you will pull the next chapter together and see what is in store for the new love birds....
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