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By : Lollipop
  • From ANON - Damn_Mage on February 19, 2005
    Get well soon and carry on with the good work.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on February 19, 2005
    As a reply to your note: I'm glad to hear your sticking to your fanfiction even through such an awful illness.
    I hope your health will be restored haistly.

    As for your reply to my own: I hope you'll get around [when your feeling better of course] to fixing that little segment. It would help to rid the confusion from newer readers.

    I hope you will be up and about soon.
    Take your time with the next chapter. Take as long as you need, but come back to us in perfect health.

    Be well,
    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - clarichan on February 18, 2005
    I'm glad for your understanding! and you answered the critics really well! I just wanted to tell you that even though the reviewers tell u to update soon....even if we pest you to death....if you take your time with it....because really your ideas are excellent.....you just need to fix it up a bit...I'm sure the wait will be worth while. I can't wait till you have it all ready k! and don't let your own impatience deter you from writing one of the greatest fics i've ever read.....ook...


    work hard....and you'll earn more (i sound like an old lady in the body of a 16 year old.) lol the greatest of all lucks.....but if you don't continue this ever....then die! i'm just kidding..still...you MUST continue. :D
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  • From ANON - Silver rose fox on February 18, 2005
    Thanks I am glad you think so. Put it can be good at the right time.^__^
    I am relly sorry you are sick.I guess it my falt that I am tying to rush you. I almost never read the
    auther notes left for us.Once again sorry (bows head and hit the desk).
    Well get better soon. I can wait until you are feeling better to write.
    I will tell my friend to stop trying get mad at you for not puting up another chapter or jest
    tell them to stop it.(^_^")
    Get better soon.^_^
    Your Fan,
    Silver Rose Fox
    a.k.a
    Foxxy.^_*
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  • From on February 18, 2005
    I hate Touma, too so let's make him pay! As for the Shuichi getting pregnant thing, you should have this world have, that only special blood lines have the ability to have children, male or female. You can say it was a gift from the gods, you can have Shu-chan's family one of them, and that can be one of the reasons that Shu's father was hesitant to the idea of him marrying Yuki, and asked how would Yuki and Shu have heirs! I think that only Ryuichi and Shu's father should know the secret, and later on when Yuki and Shuichi have relations, you should have Ryuichi decide to tell him! Well I hope you like this idea, and email me at inumoon3@yahoo.com if you want more specific dialogue, or plot!!!! Well update soon, i love this story!!!! Oh and are Ryuichi and Tatsuha going to get together soon?
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  • From ANON - Silver rose fox on February 17, 2005
    FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >_< PUT ANOTHER CHAPTER UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!#_# Some
    of us,as well other will like to know what happen next you know.You want more review right?
    Then put ANOTHER CHAPTER UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE STORY IS GREAT.
    SO PLEASE PUT ANOTHER CHAPTER UP SOOS-SOON-SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!+_+ And if you don't know what
    SOON is LOOK IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great story keep going..^_^
    Your Fan,
    Silver Rose Fox
    a.k.a
    Foxxy.^_*
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  • From on February 14, 2005
    Great update, I can't wait!!! Oh Touma makes me so mad, why did he tell Yuki that Shu-chan was a whore, hopefully Yuki has more sense and will figure out Shu-chan's not a whore. Oh and Ryu-chan and Tatsu-chan are so bad, how could you make-out with someone you don't know...Tatsu-chan is bad tricking Ryu-chan to his room...lol! Well anyway great update, can't wait to read the next, and maybe you could have MPREG!!!
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  • From ANON - ESCA on February 13, 2005
    CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER AND WHEN WILL EIRI LEARN THAT SHUS NOT A WHORE
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  • From on February 13, 2005
    I've liked your story very much. I'ts interesting and well written. Keep going :) I'm waiting the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Rubi on February 06, 2005
    love your story its sooo cool and adorable~ I read one chap and tried to do my hw but couldnt -^_^- can u email me when u update? i dont check this site a lot! ill b waiting for the next chapter~!!! ja
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  • From ANON - Silver rose fox on February 05, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I SO HATE YOU!!!!!! @_@ How could you have leave it at that???????????? When it was geting so goood?!?! You better have another chapter soon up or all your fan that agreeds we me are going to hurt you!!!!!!*_* So don't be a meanie and do another chapter!!!!!!!!!!! Pleaseeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! Or I won't live until this the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! !_! So hurry up and update soon pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^________________________________________________________________________________*
    You Fan,
    Silver Rose Fox
    a.k.a
    Foxxy.^_*
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  • From ANON - clarichan on February 05, 2005
    just wanted to say one more thing.....I agree with Hitomi......please don't be one of those people to say that she was being mean by telling you that it is not good as it is written now.....what she (i'm guessing its a she) said is so very true and i hope you take her advice...good luck ;D
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  • From ANON - clarichan on February 05, 2005
    lol....oh wow..how mean a cliff hanger...I hope you don't leave us hanging for too long or we'll choke....please continue soon :D
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on February 04, 2005
    Well I think there's plot, don't be so hard on yourself, this is a very good story, and you are so incredibly evil for leaving it right there, hurry up and get back from vacationing!!!!!>< Keep up the good work and get out of writers block... please^__^
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on February 04, 2005
    (Ch. 4)
    I'm not going to flame this chapter, but I have to say this: even if you really want to post right away, it's better you wait, get it beta-ed and then publish it with a delay instead of a very haistly mistake-filled chapter.
    It wasn't a plotless chapter; every chapter somehow connects, like Shuichi meeting Eiri in the end, and Suguru and Hiro's romance becoming public to us readers. But you seem to have some inconsistencies; First, Suguru said that he would need to warm up Shuichi's bath water, and for the best of my knowledge, he would need to do *something* to warm up the water instead of smooching with his boyfriend.
    Secondly, Wasn't this certain bath house for servants? If so, why was Eiri, the price, there? Even if he did seek solace I doubt Eiri, with his mightier than thou act would place his foot in the servant's bath house.

    Also I would like to suggest that the sound of knocking, or other sounds as such, shouldn't be written out. i.e. "A loud knock on the door pulled Shuichi out of his sleep..." or "The knocking continued, each knock quickly increasing in volume."

    Please, this story has so much potential! I would really like to see both this story improve in style, grammar and spelling and both in your personal knowledge of the English language.
    Please don't simply rely on Word's spell and grammar check, it is often wrong. You need a beta, and to re-read the chapter a couple of times before posting. [I find that taking a break after the first re-read and taking a long-ish break before re-reading the chapter once again helps me find mistakes that I wouldn't see without the afermentioned break.]

    Please take my comments to heart. I would like no more than to see a beta-ed version of this fanfiction. It's concept and idea is far too precious to let it go to waste.

    Hope you have on your family vacation.

    Until the next chapter,
    Ja ne~
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