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Reviews for Emperor\'s Bride

By : Lollipop
  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2005
    haha i like the cliff hanger!!
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  • From Reyn on February 04, 2005
    AH!! You're evil!! That was totally unfair!!

    WAH!!!
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on February 03, 2005
    Hey, this chapter was really good, yea I WAS a little bit disappointed that there wasn't a lemon between Eiri and Shuichi, but then again like you said it would be too soon. Now the characters can dream about it and crave for it to actually happen... if that is going to be the case but what happens happens^^. Awe I'm sorry you're sick, that really sucks, take vitamin C and Zinc, it will be gone within 3-4 days at the most ^^, well I am anticipating the next chapter and hope to read it soon, keep up the good work^__^!!!
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  • From ANON - clarichan on February 02, 2005
    hey! lol i liked this chapter...the grammar is still irking me though....um i don't mind who you choose. The choice is up to you...the story is really interesting...can't wait for the next chappy :D
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  • From ANON - weeeeee on February 02, 2005
    Although the idea behind the great is pretty good, there are some things that need fixing. You need to watch out for grammar and spelling mistakes, and some of the wordings in the sentences are awkward. Here is my rating:

    Grammar/spelling: 6/10
    Writing style: 6/10
    Entertainment factor 9/10
    Plot + character development 6.5/10
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  • From ANON - buenagirl on February 01, 2005
    Yet another beautiful chapter. I'm glad that you waited to put the lemons in. It makes it that much more interesting. Again, I would be more than happy to beta for you. Just email me whenever you're ready... ^_^ Keep up the good work. I just love this fic.
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  • From ANON - Glisban on February 01, 2005
    I am sorry about your cold. Hope it get better for you.Oh,and I like this chapter it was good very good.So when every can do another. When you finish your school stuff and other stuff,please.Good job.^-^
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on February 01, 2005
    (Ch. 3)
    Much better. Wonderful chapter.
    Really wonderful chapter.
    I'm glad you didn't add a lemon. Gahhh! I can't WAIT to see both Shu's and Eiri's reasction when they discover the truth!
    Ha!


    Until the next,
    Ja ne~
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  • From Reyn on January 31, 2005
    wah! Poor Shuichi!! I can't wait to see if Tohma's plan backfires in his face. Update update!!
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  • From ANON - buenagirl on January 30, 2005
    I could beta for you if you'd like. Just email me and let me know... ^_^
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  • From ANON - buenagirl on January 30, 2005
    Oh you're doing so well. Yeah, I see the spelling errors, but for English not being your first language, you do very well. I want to encourage you to continue this story. It is so wonderful and I so want to see what happens next... ^_^
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  • From ANON - MeiKimari on January 30, 2005
    I don't have any problems with description whatsoever while reading your story. I think it's just fine. Though...putting the page the way you did, shows ..^_^" You didn't write all that much. All I'd say is...try to either write more in your chapters, or speed up the pace. I mean, your summary says lemon, I think your reviewers want lemon. XD
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on January 30, 2005
    oooOOooo, I want to know what Eiri's reaction is when he see's Shuichi. But that was kind of mean of Tohma to say that to Eiri, mean for Shuichi that is. Well, other than that your spelling is much better, and I hope to read the next chapter very soon^^ Keep up the good work^__^!!!!
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  • From ANON - clarichan on January 30, 2005
    hi! I'm glad that u updated...I can't wait till Eiri finally meets Shuichi...About the grammar stuff I'm sure that if u ask someone will help you...if no one accepts the offer i editing your work....i have lots of things to do but i guess i could help u out and help u with the grammar...just email me the chapters and stuff...don't worry too much trust me your story is good...its not the quality that it lacks it just needs to be beta read...let me know soon :D
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  • From ANON - tenchini on January 30, 2005
    OMG!!!! This is such a good story! I am like at the edge of my seat here. Please update soon it is sooo~ GOOD!!!!!!! I can't wait until the next chapter keep up the GREAT work!
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