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Reviews for Emperor\'s Bride

By : Lollipop
  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2005
    no.. i like how u are writing the story... please continue
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on January 30, 2005
    (Ch. 2)
    Such a wonderful idea, such an evil Tohma.
    But I think you need a beta. Do you have one?

    Wonderful chapter. Really.
    All you need is someone to proof-read your chapters before you post. I think that will help a lot.

    Awaiting the next chapter,
    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on January 30, 2005
    (Ch. 1)
    Nice idea, horrible grammar and spelling - you'll need to work on that.
    Be more descriptive, as well.

    But all in all, I like your idea so far and would like to see more.


    So until then,
    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - LadyMoon on January 30, 2005
    This is a very intreasting plot line. I think you should contule it. UPDATE sooon
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  • From ANON - Carrot on January 29, 2005
    wow! Hurry the hell up with this one man! This story looks kick-ass^-^ so update your story! NOW!
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on January 29, 2005
    This is a very clever story and I would very much like to read more of it... hopefully soon ^^. My only itsy bitsy complaint is that like 5-10 words if that were spelled wrong, and I think that also includes gramatical errors, but all in all, very good. Not to bad for your first fan fic, maybe after you finish this fic, I would like to read more of your writing, keep up the good work ^__^!!!
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  • From on January 29, 2005
    I think this is really good! You should post it on ff.net! Well anyway update soon and do you think you could possibly make it into an MPREG, you will gain more reviews that way, but remember it's only a suggestion!!! Well update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - clarichan on January 29, 2005
    This is really interesting and i like it....there is a problem though...u need a beta reader because the mistakes were getting type of annoying...i suggest u get someone to take care of the spelling and i think it would be much more enjoyable...Please continue soon though :D
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  • From ANON - Tsuki Seishin on January 29, 2005
    Whoa...I cannot wait to see the outcome of this ^^;;; Very good! Well written also. I can't wait to read more!! Please update soon ;__; Onegai? Well I'll review some other time. Bai Bai!! ~ Tsuki
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