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Reviews for Emperor\'s Bride

By : Lollipop
  • From NekoiHiwatari on October 10, 2007
    I reviewed, so UPDATE~!!! XD
    I really love how you turned this to an AU~
    Prince-EMperor-Nobels type really do appeal to me~!!! XD
    and Shuichi having to hide his true identity is wow~!!!
    and Yuki!!!

    UPDATE PLEASE~!!! XD
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  • From ANON - tatoro on November 25, 2006
    please update soon... man this is a really cool fic
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  • From ANON - Iname on September 28, 2006
    Alright you...you big sadist! Give me more!!! I mean seriously, you posted half of this in Gurabiteshiyon.net and you didn't post anymore. I was soooo sad I was practically crying and then I come here and find this?! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE! For the sake of myself! You must! :sniff: okay okay, I'm not mad cause the story's so great. I just wish more more and more would come. Thanks for this awesome post! Notify me when you post a new one. Promise?
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on August 20, 2006
    more more o fthe story i love itand can notwait for more of the story very good
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  • From ANON - Lumina on July 25, 2006
    Do you have any other writings? I wanna see~! Keep up! Great writing.
    Don't worry too much about the minor grammar and spelling mistakes, if you become a writer~, thats what editors are for~! =D
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  • From ANON - Menri on July 25, 2006
    hey hey why don't you write the next ones I wanna know what happens. I think the series is good. ;_; ah, but i suppose im a year late.
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  • From ANON - animaiden@adelphia.net on June 22, 2006
    Your fic is improving. At first the characters were really superficial and stereotyped. Way to go on character development and keep up the good work. But please, find yourself a beta. You write in English really well, much better than I write in my foreign language, but a native speaker will still notice the difference. Besides betas also help with style and little plot problems (you accidently wrote "Shuichi" instead of "Eiri" in that scene where Eiri throws Tohma out of the room). Or just proof it yourself: that really helps

    Just keep going, and finish the fic. We look forward to your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Shatsu on June 19, 2006
    I really like this story, you are an amazing writer. ^_^ And I was really sad when I thought you wouldn't no longer update this, but now I'm happy again. :D I can't wait to see the next chapter..

    Sorry my bad english, I hope you understand it. ^^;;
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on June 10, 2006
    more chapter of the story love it and you are doing good on it and plasce more chapter of the story .
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  • From ANON - Lonerist Pyscho on June 08, 2006
    I love this story. I mean it. This is the only place I have found that has the most chapters though. Please update.
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  • From ANON - Honesty on June 07, 2006
    Sorry, but this chapter just sucked. Getting Ryuichi pregnant and then having a miscarriage was just NOT needed, there are already enough crappy mpregs in the Gravitation section. And when the hell is Shuichi going to wake up? The story's getting pretty boring without him.
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  • From ANON - Julianne on June 06, 2006
    You keep changing between Tohma and Touma, it's kind of annoying. Anyway, I like the story, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Julianne on June 06, 2006
    I really like your story, but I have some suggestions. I assume that the advisor Thoma is actually suppose to be Tohma, or Touma, depending on whether it bothers you that the Japanese don't have Hs when they use romanji (sp?). Also, in chapter 2 Eiri makes a comment about Mexico, but in the 13th century Mexico hadn't been discovered yet. You use the word "yeah" a lot in your story, but I think it would sound more proper if you used "yes" instead. The only other thing I have to say is you should proofread your chapters more closely, there are typos and small mistakes. Anyway, I want to go read the rest so until later!
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  • From ANON - Lella on June 06, 2006
    Nuuuu, not mpreg! *flails and dies* Mpreg goes against all my fandom principles. Drat. And I really liked this fic.
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  • From ANON - Lella on June 06, 2006
    SQUEEEEEEE!!!!

    yay! I thought this was discontinued! ZOMGI'MSOHAPPYITISN'T *does dance of joy* yes, so... my reaction might seem a little over the top... it's just I've been so curious about how the story would continue... yeah, so I'mma go read it now :P
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