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Reviews for Being Loved

By : NinElise
  • From on October 15, 2007
    I like it. You should edit it though: spaces, some mistakes like here
    'too look at the small pink rose bud, purring he then it a few times' - I quess you lost 'licked'
    Oh, and you shouldn't write 'coz' instead of 'because', especially when it's not a dialogue.
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  • From ANON - Sakora on February 04, 2005
    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!...^^ more please?
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  • From on February 03, 2005
    cute idea, it does seem like a good time for Omi to tell Ken he loves him. I'm not a huge Omi/Ken shipper but I do think the go well together. Watch your tenses and things like "to" instead of "too". Paragraghs would also make it much easier to read, I got a headache reading line after line with no spaces. And definately work on the interaction of the characters. If you put quotes in for a conversation, a new paragraph needs to come after the end of the quote. good idea though, keep working :)
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