Click Here!

Reviews for All the Kisses

By : SuT
  • From Reyn on February 07, 2005
    My favorite was the first one...at least, so far. But I like how they both have a nice sweet theme to them, despite the lack of action. Its a refreshing break. Keep it up!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Hitomi on February 06, 2005
    (Ch. 1) Hilarious. Silly. Wonderfuly written.

    (Ch. 2) Such a relaxed tone, I felt as if I were the one at the beach having a nice laid back vacation. Really beautiful. But I've gotta tell ya, towards the edn you used the expression "Twist my arm". Now I understand it, but it took me a few minutes until I realized it was just slang and not Yuki commanding Shu to twist his arm. XDD
    I'm silly like that.


    Anyways, I really enjoyed both chapters and the main idea behind this fanfiction. I'm a huge YukiXShuichi fan, so... ya, it's really nice to finally see some well written fanfictions on aff that aren't just good plot + bad spelling, or good spelling + jaded plot.

    Hope you get around to updating soon,
    But until then,
    Ja ne~
    Report Review

  • From ANON - hColleen on February 05, 2005
    Owwie...I've had sunburns that color...they're not fun at all. Sweet story, though...very sweet how Yuki takes care of li'l Shu-chan :D
    Report Review

  • From ANON - drake220 on February 03, 2005
    are you going to be continuing this or doing 30 seperate ficlets?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - hColleen on February 03, 2005
    Cute :D I haven't had Jolt in a long time...I'm weird, though...it put me to sleep. Caffine from another source...I like that line :D
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!