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By : Ivadell
  • From ANON - ~Moon-Daisuke on May 23, 2005
    Wow........I liked it. I am curious where you are going with it. I am wondering about this change. Ahh I will be patient and keep my rambling thoughts/ possibilities to myself for now......... Keep up the FANTASTIC work. I am really enjoying this story.

    ~Moon-Daisuke
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  • From ANON - Sera Sutaa Meikaa on May 16, 2005
    Hey! It's me. I'm too lazy to logg in. Good job on this chapter. Your writing is vastly improving and I'm proud of you! Remember, I'm open for beta'ing jobs if you need it.
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  • From ANON - Millicent on April 15, 2005
    He plunged into her. She gasped and flinched, her eyes wide. "Oh,
    Goddess!" She cried. ?????

    You're a virgin aren't you?

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  • From NightSkyLight on April 13, 2005
    Woo very cool adding Galaxia there! That was a very cute chapter. Please update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - tenshisailor on April 13, 2005
    finally i get to read a fic where Kakyuu is a well-developed char. and that you are pairing up her w/ seiya is also great and refreashing(the seiya/usagi pairing has been beaten down so much).
    hmmmm...is usagi gonna be jealous??
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  • From ANON - Sutaa Meikaa on April 13, 2005
    Sorry, really lazy, don't want to logg in.

    But, nice chapter. It's very well written. Yes, feel free to contact me if you want me to beta your stuff. I've been very busy lately and it's been dying down, so I have a lot of free time. Well, for the next three weeks, then it gets busy again. What is Galaixa up to?
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  • From ANON - ~Moon-Daisuke on April 10, 2005
    I like this even though it is a Seiya/Kakyuu story. I think this chapter was good. Surprised the crap out of me with the Galaxia thing. Great work. If you need someone to beta read just give me an email and let me know what you want. Keep up the fantastic work and I will wait patiently for more! :)

    ~Moon-Daisuke
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  • From thewindthesea on March 10, 2005
    Great chapter! I loved it. I can't wait until the next one comes out. I'm seeing less and less gramatical errors and I like that.
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  • From ANON - DEEP SERENITY on March 09, 2005
    GOOD JOB i LOVE seeing Kakyuu real, AND WITH A personality, developing on for her myself in a story. GOOD JOB
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  • From ANON - ~Moon-Daisuke on March 08, 2005
    NOOOO! Please please I hope she's not going to say she loves him! Please I hope your teasing! Seiya needs Usagi not his own Princess! Great work though!!! :) I'll wait patiently. I cannot wait for more. I am excited, hopefully you keep going beyond the birth! :)

    ~Moon-Daisuke
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 01, 2005
    wow!! i loved your story!! it was really good and i really want to know what it is your gonna write down later on! keep up the good work their...
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  • From ANON - Naru on February 24, 2005
    Yo Taiki-poke! Yes, it is me, muhahaha. I felt like posting something just because well because I could so blah. Yeah Kimi would most likely spazz on you so I'd advise not tellig her....lmao. Yeah I know I'm missing a lot of school, but I'd rather not be there throwing up and crap, I'd prefer to do that at home. Besides I've only missed three days, that's not THAT much, I've missed three weeks before so meh. I'll be back tomorrow anyways, but I was informed you won't be *shrug* Oh well. You've been on msn for like ever, you haven't once signed off, what're you doing o_O Well, anyways I got to go, working on the next chapter to tempting fate so blah.
    ~*~Naru~*~
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on February 23, 2005
    I like the interaction with Seiya and Yaten

    and the princess, I think she can be sweet but very serious when need be,

    I hope the knowing she's pregnant (less then 24 hours later)is because thier Scouts, or maybe(she's been body snatched by some force!) either way good job, maybe Seiya can help the princess relieve some stress(grins!)
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  • From NightSkyLight on February 20, 2005
    Ahh..is Yaten..pregnant? Ohhh boy..0_0 This should be very interesting....^_^ Hope to see the next chapter soon!
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  • From thewindthesea on February 20, 2005
    I love seeing Starlight stories! There aren't enough of them out there! I think that the third chapter is better than the first two. It doesn't seem as rushed as the first two did. But, overall, I really liked it. Maybe one day, I'll post the Starlight story that I am working on. Well, it's sixteen chapters and not done... But, I really like it. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

    Starlights kick ass!!
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