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By : Metranome
  • From ANON - MintyOrange on November 02, 2005
    This is absolutely awesome! Loved the way you didn't have a name for Xellos's human form, and that Xellas took the form a child. Are you going to continue the story?
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  • From ANON - PixieDust on May 21, 2005
    Amazing good job. You put a lot of work into this and it shows. The only thing I would like to see more of is more descriptions of the people and places so I could really see it in my head. Other than that great job. This could use a sequel :)
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  • From ANON - Metranome on February 24, 2005
    Thank you for your kind words Gretchen, I truly appreciate them. I had thought to myself that perhaps the middle dragged some as you've said, but I'm still learning how to use the formatting system for AFF.Net. Once I have it down pat, I'll consider revising as you've suggested.
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  • From ANON - Gretchen on February 24, 2005
    That is the best Xelloss-starting-out-as-human fic I've ever read. In fact, I normally hate them. Yours is good however. Well written... even spell-checked. I applaud your efforts. You have a fantastic talent for imagery, but I felt the middle tended to drag. It needs a bit of punching up... More action? Some more self-mutilation?
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