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By : cko
  • From ANON - goku on November 15, 2005
    rather intresting fic keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Kirei-san on November 12, 2005
    oho you're not the only one with a sex-ed class.i have too and it has three parts.talk about hell.anyway do keep up with th updates!
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  • From ANON - angelfoxsam on November 09, 2005
    good job, this is a good story so far n.n please continue! *hugs*
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  • From ANON - LadySkyfire on October 12, 2005
    Good first chapter, I like it! It's compelling, and I hope you do write more, because I want to know what happens. I thought your sex scene between Akane and Ryouga was really well done...I know more than a few people who've had similarly unfortunate experiences, though I don't think they ever had quite as much of a train-wreck afterwards =P.

    On a side note, why did Ryouga's penis have hair on it? That would have to be some kind of serious deformation, because though the pubic region is hairy, the actual penis is smooth and hairless, since it's designed to fit inside the vagina like a key in a lock up to the cervix, for ideal reproductive purposes...i guess maybe sex-ed didn't get even that far =P

    Its a shame that they scrapped your sex-ed program. My recommendation to you: go to the nearest book store and get "The Better Sex Guide" by Nitya Lacroix, because it's got more than just techniques, it's also got a section on anatomy and health. Share it with your friends too...if the responsible adults won't help you, better to read about it first than just jump in head first and pray that you don't fuck up!

    Any way, great first chapter, I hope to see another sometime!
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  • From SithMaster04 on September 26, 2005
    OMG, this is such a great fic. Please please please continue with it, I hate it when I like a fic and then the author never concludes it. So please don't do that, give me closure!
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on August 15, 2005
    Its a good story, I just feel sorry for akane, and I dont like the way you made ryouga seem disgusting. ...And I never new that hair could grow on the tip....Cause I didnt know it was possible. Ah anyways, continue i wanna see what happens
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  • From ANON - Toni on August 05, 2005
    Insteresting idea but Akane seem to be a little OOC. Oh well. Also a woman CAN get pregnant her first time, but there's a myth that says they can't. But you probably knew that but made the characters believe the myth.
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  • From ANON - velika on July 28, 2005
    you should really continue!!!!!
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  • From ANON - c-ko on June 20, 2005
    Hey guys, I know people are excited about this story and I am planning on writting a new chapter at a much later date (because I have school, work, and other projects) I've already started it, but I wont be done for a while, sorry. If I posted it now, it would just be really poorly written, with many cliches. I've already deleted about half of the next chapter because I didn't like how it was going and I want to keep it realistic and not too cheesey with the reactions of each character.

    Anyhow, thanks very much for all the comments and emails of support. If you wanna contact me please use e mail (or comment here since your email may not pass my spam filter)and please, please, please, do not comment on my LJ, especially since that is reserved for comments about my online comic. Thanks!

    There are many great fics out there, so please continue finding them while I try to finish!

    c-ko


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  • From ANON - Daniel on June 20, 2005
    Good story I wish you have done more with it though
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  • From ANON - Elric Maxwell on June 12, 2005
    Man, what drama! Too bad they did kick this story off of ff.net, I think it's pretty good. The way you described everything(the part leading up to sex and the girls chatting about it in school) pretty much happens to just about everyone. You feel awkward and start to wonder that 'maybe it is the right thing to do, and I won't feel left out' sort of thing. While some have gave into that mentality, others thankfully, have not. IMO, since they have a problem with minors on that site, then perhaps this is one fic the kiddies NEED to stumble across. I can't help but wonder if because of her hastiness, she winds up getting pregnant from Ryoga. It would seem a shame if that happens, and Akane and Ranma don't get a chance to finally get started on a relationship. But, first and foremost, great work! I can't wait to see what happens next! EM
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  • From ANON - Yeldarb1983 on June 08, 2005
    hey, i read this a while back and it's really interesting (not to mention a nice change of pace from some of the other fics you see here where everybody and their brother is having a threeway/gangbang with everyone imaginable >>; ) anyway, two things really quick

    1) : hugs : im sorry if this ever happened to you, no one should feel obligated to have sex just because it's the 'in' thing to do, and it's really too bad that your friends made you feel this way

    2) please add another chapter, this story is just sorta hanging there, all pathetic-like, with no epilouge or anything (kinda like a giving a starving puppy a piece of meat and then taking it away from it again)

    anyway, good story, update soon, etc, etc ^__^
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  • From ANON - sesshy_lover on June 05, 2005
    JUST ONE WORD TO EXPRESS MY GRATITUDE TOWARD THIS FANFIC: EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - KikYasha on April 20, 2005
    Please continue. I really like the story. I think it's actually pretty in character. Ranma's such a sweetie sometimes. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Wow on April 09, 2005
    This is pretty good. Please continue.
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