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Reviews for Bring Me to Life

By : Ookami13
  • From SilverFox on August 13, 2007
    Very good so far, though I must admit that the last two chapters had me confused as to what was going on. I'm pretty sure though when more has been posted, that confusion will clear up.

    As for grammar and other things, I can't really judge that ( as I royally suck at grammar ^^; ), but from what I can tell, its all good. :-) It rare to come across a story that is well written where the spelling and grammar is coherent.

    Hope to be able to read more on this story soon. :-)

    SilverFox =^.^=

    P.S. I can't believe I ran into this story again after two years and 14 days ( damn that's odd too! )! Its been a LONG time since I've read this. I can't remember much of the first one, but this one is pretty awesome. :-) Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - GoodMorningBeautiful2005 on September 23, 2006
    This is a really good story...I've enjoyed it very much and I can't wait for the next chapters to come out...

    I'm not really a Samurai Deeper Kyo fan...More like a Jak and Daxter game fan...but your story has caught my attention...

    Update very soon please!

    ~GMB~
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  • From ANON - Chloe on September 02, 2006
    Really like this version :) Glad I found it on here, I was reading it on fanfiction.net but kept getting errors cus they're having problems with the site. Hope you continue soon.
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  • From ANON - Reya on January 28, 2006
    I really like this fic and felt severly upset when it ended in a cliffy. Please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Deanna on January 10, 2006
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! The cliffhangers, the cliffhangers!

    Okay, melodramatics aside, I would really appreciate if you finished the fic. Because it rocks, the characters are portrayed amazingly well, and it is an original storyline that is very addicting. Umm...any more reasons...? Ah. Yes. Please?
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  • From ANON - Ngty_Novelist on November 22, 2005
    Whattttt! It's not done how could you T_T aww
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  • From ANON - Ngty_Novelist on November 22, 2005
    I loved that character you added she's hilarious I can imagine her smiling like yukimura somehow and torturing kyo at the same time ' , '
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  • From ANON - Ngty_Novelist on November 22, 2005
    I thought it was a One Shot T_T I shall keep reading cuz I got hooked wah!
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  • From ANON - junsui on October 27, 2005
    plsssssss!!!!!!! continue with the writing. i cant wait to read the next chapter!!!! i like your work.... so pls continue on behalf of all the readers out there whom love your work. *_*
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2005
    reeeeeeaaally glad that it wasn't a one-shot.... please up date soon... i'm quite intrigued
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  • From SilverFox on July 30, 2005
    @_@ I need more! More I say! This is a good story! I can't wait for you to update, can you please update soon?! Until next time! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Nis-chan on June 22, 2005
    I really like your OC, she's very witty. great job and update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Clemen on March 31, 2005
    I just started to get into Samurai Deeper Kyo. Cool serious. I enjoy reading your fic. Hope you update soon. Until then, take care, and god bless.
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  • From ANON - matunobi on March 13, 2005
    Well, the story was off to a good start, and you are a talented writer, but you lost me on the 4th chapter, and the 5th chapter I skimmed over in hopes that there would be more Kyo/Yuya scenes, sadly it seems that not only weren't there any, but Yuya is once again seperated from Kyo, hence no romantic scenes in the near future. I don't mind OC's, but she took over the story. You should change the summary. This is not a flame, I am not yelling at you, or berating your skills as an author, I am just disappointed in the fact that the OC took over the entire story. (oh, you may want to add a list of terms/definitions. I was able to understand the meaning from the context, but some may not.)
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  • From ANON - LadyWater2010 on March 04, 2005
    Very good. I like your OC and I don't think that everybody else is OOC.
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