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Reviews for Until Your Dying Day

By : omukashi
  • From ANON - Mel on December 13, 2006
    OMFG I LOVE THI SSTORY SO FAR!!!! Are you seriously having trouble finding a beta? BECAUSE I WOULD ADORE BEING UR BETA!!!! lol thanx for the great fanfic, when will chapter 6 go up?
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  • From ANON - Sila on September 13, 2006
    Oo, I really like this. ^^ I have my own story of my OC dealing with Leukemia, and I've got a ton of reasearch printed out. I like how yours is more simplex than what I have in mind for mine. XD Email meh some time ^^
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  • From ANON - udontneedtoknow on January 22, 2006
    i thought this was a great story and i hope u write more!
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  • From ANON - hafiz on October 01, 2005
    it's kind of too sad. can lighten it up a bit
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  • From ANON - Lakota on September 18, 2005
    If you need help writing the lemon. I can help ya. Email me or AIM me.
    aim= ajones6302
    email= ajones6302@elp.rr.com

    I have written nothing but M/F scenes, so I think I can help you. I love Chi/Hideki stories, so please contact me.
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  • From ANON - George on September 17, 2005
    You have made Chi a little too human. The is a line where she prays and that is out of character. I cannot think of a way for Hideki to live without magic or superscience. The only thing that comes to mind is haveing Minoru pay for a clone to be made. Still the clone would start out as a baby. Maybe Chi could then be his 'mother'. Memories are not saved so the clone would be a new person. Clones also have shorter lifespans than the originals. Something about teleomeres. Otherwise the fic is good. Spelling needs to be corrected though.
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  • From ANON - voltron-x on August 23, 2005
    depressing. =( im going to continue reading this story because its well written as long as i can but depressing things arent really something i like ta read.
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  • From ANON - Rachel on August 14, 2005
    *dies* I cannot WAIT for the next chapter...you will update soon right?
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on August 11, 2005
    O.O poor hideki, I dont want him to die! Hey if you have a mailing list add me cause i think your story is great.
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  • From ANON - Martrex on July 25, 2005
    Esxellent start, this could carry on to be an excellent story! It's a little hard to guage from what little there is but i hope that will be more.

    Good work!

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  • From ANON - Molly on July 21, 2005
    Please write more of your story. Chobits isn't getting a lot of stories and yours is the best so far. Please contine!
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  • From ANON - Tamashii on June 28, 2005
    Tamashii here! I loved the story, I do hope you continue, I also hope you don't kill Hie on us, that wouldn't be very good. Well please do continue and I look forward to an update from you.

    Tamashii
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  • From ANON - Chibi on June 16, 2005
    I love what you have here so far cant wait to read more
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  • From PasuterEnogu on June 16, 2005
    Wow, alright, update soon! I really want to now what will happen to Hideki!
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  • From on May 22, 2005
    very sad very angsty MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER DAMNIT!
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