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Reviews for Blood Red

By : DayastJoy
  • From ANON - Lily on April 06, 2005
    Hi, I really love this fic! 58 and 39 are my fav pairings and you write so well!!! I love the way you set up Gojyo and Hakkai, so sweet!!! Love the imagery and character descriptions, they're incredibly vivid. So anyway love your work and cant wait for the next chapter :) Oh and apologies for any dire spelling!
    Lil
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  • From ANON - aylex on April 05, 2005
    Nice! You wrapped up events, set up character relationships nicely. And now, boom! action. I really like the story so far. Write more soon :)
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  • From ANON - Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip* on March 11, 2005
    Excellent work! This was superbly well written -- no -- crafted. This piece was technically sound, the characterizations were on point and the pace was wonderful.

    I believe this is the most plausible “end game” scenario I have read or pondered. I would not be surprised if ,minus the lemons, your words find themselves upon my television.

    I felt the pairings came about in a most natural way and I appreciate the way you kept the injuries in mind during the more “juicy” moments. Hurt and comfort themed stories are so much fun that the tendency is to forget the practicality of it all. Good work.

    One point of critique, I’m not sure if this was spacing done intentionally or if when you converted to HTML the program messed with your spacing, but there were a few times it took a little bit to identify the speaker of a sentence or the object of a “he”. The problem was easily solved by re-reading a sentence or two. I just felt I should point it out. It seemed rather random, so I suspect it was something in the HTML conversion. That can do strange things to a document and some of them cannot be corrected.

    Again, excellent work. I really like what you have laid out and established. I greatly appreciate the emphasis on Kou, he is often forgotten in fan fiction. I know I’m rather guilty of it.

    Thank you for your time and effort. Thank you for sharing and I am looking forward to your next installment.

    Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*
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  • From aimless38 on March 11, 2005
    Oh what a wonderful beginning. You have a thorough grasp on the characters and even have all my favorite pairings. It was well written and had me riveted to the screen. I cannot wait to read more! It is delightful!
    Hugs
    Amy

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