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Reviews for Hiko\'s Water Sprite

By : Marlingrl
  • From LittleImpaler on February 10, 2008
    DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have talents. I love these chapters so much! :) Can't wait to read your next one. She is luck. Hiko is one hot 43 year old. You should write chapter where she comes vist him in his house.
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  • From darkjubei on March 18, 2007
    *broken brain* Hiko sexy...

    *coughs* Anyway, i loved the whole thing... if you choose to continue it i'm sooooo for it but if not what's here is just fine :D Well done and I mean it! ^^
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  • From ANON - me on January 20, 2006
    wow i absolutley love this ya know theres not enough hiko stories out there i realy hope this continues and i wonder if there will be a plot i hope i cant wait for your next update
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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on October 28, 2005
    Ahhhh... I love this naughty story. You should have so many more reviews on it.
    So, so many more.
    It's beautiful... utterly, and completely beautiful.

    Tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - shuiede on July 29, 2005
    hey! what happened? kindly please update this one?
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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on May 25, 2005
    This is turning into a wonderful love story. I hope you continue it. The last two chapters of 'Control' were good as well. You are blossoming into a beautiful erotica author. Keep up the good work. You can only get better from here.

    Tuski-san

    p.s. Thank you for what you said in my reviews. It means more than you can imagine. god bless my friend.
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  • From ANON - shuiede on May 25, 2005
    your imagination is a very, very naughty one! This is so good! Keep it up!
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  • From LindaSims on April 25, 2005
    Enjoyed? most asuredly. You must finish and then continue.

    Tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - shuiede on April 22, 2005
    This is good! It reminds me of some of my fave historical novels. I like it so much! Please continue this one.
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  • From Lin on March 17, 2005
    That was........yummy! I didn't know you wrote. Shows how long it's been since
    I viewed the lists. Must read more of this woman's
    work. And you... you must write another chapter to this ... ahem... one shot.

    One word of advice... sentence variation: Your first paragraph ended with 4
    sentences, all beginning with 'ing words, and then the next paragraph began
    with one. Only someone who is used to critiquing manuscripts would really
    notice, and I am a member of two professional writting groups... hence, I noticed.
    :P A few other extraneous words and double word useage (just proof read a
    little more), nothing major. The piece was Exemplary.

    Well Done... I'll be watching you, young one. I think this needs to go on my
    websight. That I do.... :)

    Tsuki-san

    Off to find something else of yours.....
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