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Reviews for Forbidden Fruit

By : Amako
  • From ANON - Rinicka on November 13, 2005
    I was really great! I like dark Chrno very much. Unfortunately I haven't read the manga, but I suppose that he is there much darker than in anime. Anyway - I liked your fiction - it was very intense!!!! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Animecake on animespiral and mediaminer on November 08, 2005
    I loved your story. I love Chronon Crusade and your writting reminds me alot of mine. I can't wait to read more of your works. I might even become a member here. If your allowed to be under 18 that is. ta ta for now.
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  • From Finality on October 11, 2005
    That was a very delightful read. I enjoyed it very much.

    ...But in the back of their car? I wonder what they'll think every time they look back there. MORE! xD Beautiful story.
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  • From ANON - Chrno on July 23, 2005
    A very well written story! dare sayone of the best chrno crusade fics on aff,net ^_^.. And yes.,..i like seieng chrno reveal his darkness a bit. he's a very tormented character .. esp in the manga.. thye dont really go that much inot it in the anime ^^; . I look forward to more of your chrno crusade writings (I certainly hope there are more coming! )

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Steph on July 05, 2005
    You sure that was your first? Hehe I think I like Chrno forward like that.
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  • From ANON - sharingank on June 30, 2005
    *fans self* Amazing. Simply amazing. *shivers at the thought of a nude Chrno* Mmmm...nummy...XD You're writing style is fabulous. It was very fluid, and it made the story all the better to read. Great work!
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  • From ANON - Mitsuki (too lazy to log in XD) on May 29, 2005
    Very well written. As you said, a bit OOC, but I like the darker side of Chrno, and it's written very well. Thanks for sharing :)
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  • From ANON - aimless on May 27, 2005
    I thought it was done just right. Passionate with those delicious hints of darkness lurking beneath the surface. Well written and you have a wonderful way with words. I'd say you have a talent for erotic writing if this is only your first attempt.
    Amy
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  • From ANON - NUNI on May 15, 2005
    I liked this. I love C/R and this was a little dark but not that dark. It was a bit short but I really loved it. Please continue writing.
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  • From ANON - rachi on May 09, 2005
    WONDERFUL!! This was just my type of story. I really liked it. I do hope you try to write another one! It was truely incredible! I loved how at the end, you said, 'And no one but them would ever know.' And how the darkness was mentioned throughout the whole story. I really loved this story. I do hope you do another one. Ja! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Eddie the Black Maru on May 09, 2005
    E...........O.O................3
    I liked it this much!
    what a way to break my chrno Crusade fanfic cherry. Beautiful. stunning. I love it. I am almost afraid to read anything else. However, I will read the one you suggested. I liked Chrno in this, dark is good.......very good
    Much Love
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - i like cheese on May 02, 2005
    hm... pretty good ^-^ I liked it... and the manga does hint at chrno's darkness more... though I would really call this a 'dark fic' no offense of course, if that is what you were going for... I like dark fics so I've read a lot of them so I guess I"m a bit 'desensitized' if you get my drift! lol! nice work!
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  • From ANON - ennui deMorte on April 28, 2005
    Great Lemon!! I love the darkness you showed so well in Chrono ~ you let it peak out, just how it would really happen in real life, in the height of passion. The blunt statements that Chrono makes: "My darkness wants you" and "Let me have you" ~ it just made my body thrum! And it was so perfect having Chrono mark Rosette's physical body as his possession the same way that the watch marks her soul as his.

    Would very much like to see more ~ either additional PWPs added to this fic or more one shots of Chrono and Rosette.
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  • From ANON - Dragodden on April 26, 2005
    Wow! Your first lemon? I have absolutely no complaints! In fact, thank you! Seriously, any Chrno fic added to this section that isn't yaoi is greatly appreciated! Finally, Chrno Crusade is getting the popularity it deserves. Little by little. ^__^; Anyhow, I really enjoyed your one-shot, and I seriously hope you think about writing s'more.

    Again, thanks and good luck!
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  • From ANON - sanzo on April 25, 2005
    not bad I liked it you should make another chapter to it though
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