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Reviews for Forbidden Fruit

By : Amako
  • From SailorTiamat on April 21, 2005
    I like. I liked the way you brought out that inner darkness in Chrno. ^___^ Kick ass!
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  • From ANON - Happybunnyfan on April 19, 2005
    I thought it was really good for a first time lemon author. I've read crap, and this is definitly NOT crap. Hurray, you've made it into my non-existant most loved stories list! (I should get around to writing that here soon....^^;) This is an awesome Chrno Crusade fic, not some yaoi between two characters. I will honestly say that this is in the top five of the most well-written lemons I've ever read. I'm also being very serious, and I've read a lot of lemons (tee-hee!). Are you planning on writing more Chrno Crusade fics anytime soon? I must keep a lookout for them!
    Please write more Chrno Crusade fics!!! Please!!
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  • From ANON - Pocky-Chan on April 18, 2005
    Aw, that's so cute.... and no, the thought of Chrno being that dark isn't odd at all - in fact, it was in character for the most part. He's got a long past, and well, he IS a demon. The only thing I could think of was that Rosette probably wouldn't have been that willing to let him kiss her, etc (You know, she's smack him a couple times or something), and Chrno probably would have enough sense not to ... er, 'take' her while she was so young. He may be a demon, but he loves her so much, I personally think he wouldn't take that risk so easily - It kind of seemed like a spur of the moment kind of thing, and Chrno's the type to REALLY think before he acts. But otherwise, adorable 'fic. ^_^ Like I said, Chrno wasn't totally out of character. (My critiques were meant very lightly - don't take them to the extreme. You did wonderful!)

    I hope to see more from you soon! :3 Excellent job, and straight A's for you for being your first lemon. o.o Dag yo. *Hugs*
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  • From ANON - JasmineScent85 on April 18, 2005
    Hey that was really great and interesting ^_^. I like it when people make Chrno's character seem darker, it seems really interesting to me. Great job once again and yeah, they were out of character but i still like it. Keep up the great job and hope to see more of your works soon ^_^.
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  • From ANON - Rosette on April 18, 2005
    Good work! I really enjoyed it, hehehe ;-)
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  • From ANON - gx-Silver on April 18, 2005
    Hot, strangely romantic and highly erotic as well. I love the manga and the anime and found this wasn't what you'd call too OOC at all. Nicely done.
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