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Reviews for Cruel Summer

By : Atlantis
  • From ANON - miko-chan on June 15, 2005
    love it, more like this needs to exist
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  • From ANON - Rena Moon on May 26, 2005
    Wow! That was the most passionate story I have ever read between Yue & Sakura! Very wicked! Beautifully written and with such love and desire too! I love your style and hope to hear more from you!

    Rena Moon
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  • From ANON - silvermoon8573 on May 17, 2005
    Surprisingly awesome. Usually I go for the SakuraxSyaroan stories, but this one was great. I'm now opened to the possibilities of SakuraxYue. Thanks. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - rina craft on April 22, 2005
    you did pretty good for your first lemon. had you not mentioned the fact, i would have thought you were a veteran... and i'm not just saying that. the whole fic was just well written. i love your choice of words. your sentences always sounded elegant but not detached. and the plot... the fact that there was a plot to begin with is great. there was a continuity all throughout the fic and i didn't notice any holes in the story. i really liked the idea of yue being able to "feel" sakura's emotions and the fact that he could also open up his feeling to sakura. keroberos' wish was hillarious (but i guess that was to be expected). and i'm happy you got to insert sakura and syaoran's past "affair/thing". the truth is i can see your fic as a sequel to ccs... though clamp might have other pairings in mind. but what i mean is, you were able to mesh your idea with the current storyline. even though i like au fics, it sounds better if authors stick to what actually happened in the anime/manga.

    on another note, your characterization was superb. sakura was sakura and most of the other characters were acting like they should have been. although there were some lines i can't imagine yue saying ("guilty as charged" --> i tend to remember the wild wild west for some odd reason XD), but those few lines added some ounce of humanity to his character so it's no problem. and lastly, the lemon. it was of good taste. i'm happy that there wasn't any vulgar words (i just can't imagine sakura cursing.... ).

    basically it was a pleasant read. i do hope i get to read more of your works soon. you do the fanfiction world justice! keep up the good work!

    rina ^^
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  • From ANON - sabrina on April 21, 2005
    Ei, ur fic was awesome. Not because it was a lemon, but because it was so sweet. It was really touching, how they really loved each other you know? You did an awesome job! Try making another one, maybe a continuation, another story when their a couple, and eriol and tomoyo come back and stuff, you know, a new story. You said no new chapters, im asking for a new story. Thanks for the story, readers like myself our grateful. Thanks, email me.


    Your fan,

    Sabrina
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  • From ANON - A.J. on April 20, 2005
    What a great story! There just aren't enough Sakura/Yue stories around and I think you did an excellent job portraying both personalities in this lemon. I'm a little sad that there isn't a second chapter but this fanfic an definitely stand on its own. Bravo!
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