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By : USuki
  • From ANON - anonymous on June 15, 2005
    .. it was awesome!
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  • From ANON - puffin on June 12, 2005
    I'm glad you updated. I really like this story and can't wait to see what you do next. Keep it up and update when you have time.
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  • From ANON - kyoslover on June 12, 2005
    i love everything about this fic! i think you tie the lemons in whith the plot nicely!
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  • From Caerfree on May 31, 2005
    Hey! That's really nice of you to take my comments into consideration. I must say that though the other Furuba characters may have cutsie names for each other, Kyou doesn't. The only nickname he uses, besides Kusou-nezume is Shishou, which is a title of honor. That's why it seems so out of character to me. However, I still love your story, and I don't want you to change it just because I feel differently than you do. I think this story is developing quite nicely, and... well any Yuki/Kyou makes me happy. I liked the first real lemon. I like how you're keeping it slow and not rushing them into anal sex, just to do it. Also, though I am at odds with some of the characterization you use for Kyou, I think everyone else is pretty much right on. Your Shigure is especially good.

    Keep writing. Write what you like. I'll still read, even if I do have to endure "Yun-yun" ^__~
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  • From ANON - Lillyhawk on May 30, 2005
    I don't remember if I told you this before, but I absolutly love your idea for this story. It's so sweet. I can't wait till you finish. Oh and I liked the nicknames I thought they where cute.
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  • From ANON - puffin on May 30, 2005
    I'm so happy you update. I like how this story is going and I'm still sticking with what I 1st throught. Keep it up and when you have the time please update.
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  • From ANON - G-fiend on May 29, 2005
    Okay........I just love your story!!! Its awsome so far!!! You just have to update soon I can't wait to find out how it all turns out!
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  • From ANON - puffin on May 19, 2005
    I'm so loving this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon and keep up the great job.
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  • From ANON - Suki on May 16, 2005
    OK, I appreciate your criticism! it definately does have a direction, but maybe I'm not getting to it fast enough. I have no problem speeding the plot along, but there will be little blurbs of lemony smut stuck in here and there if you want to skip through it for the plot.
    You don't like the Yun Yun thing... hmm... Is this the general consensus? If so I can take it out. It is just in my expirience, everyone around me comes up with pet names for everyone else. (I have no idea where some of them come from, I mean my mom calls me Popo...) I don't even have a 'P' in my name... regardless, this is especially true for my partners, so I thought nicknames felt natural. (The fruits basket characters have a lot of nicknames for each other anyway) Thanks for reviewing. Criticism is always welcome!!!

    -Suki
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  • From Caerfree on May 16, 2005
    Okay, I just have to say the whole "Yun yun" thing is stupid in my opinion. I can not in any way shape or form see Kyou ever saying that. That said, I still like the rest of the story. It's kind of plodding along right now. I guess at this point I'm not sure what the point, drive or goal of the fic is. It's nice and stuff, but I hope you have some ultimate goal in mind for the story. It started out being about Kyou's suppressed emotions. Is it still about that? Is it about Yuki's punishment? Just wondering if you have a real direction or if you're writing based on what people tell you in reviews. So far I really like this story, but if it starts to meander, I tend to lose interest. That's just me though. I like a tight story and I don't like any excess fat or lack of direction. You're a good writer. I'll trust in your abilities.
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  • From ANON - Anne on May 15, 2005
    I love your story!! I check this site daily for updates!!! You keep the characters in character so well!!! I usually don't like kyo/yuki pairing but yours is fantastic!!!!
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  • From on May 14, 2005
    I think you are doing a great job. I'm new to this site and your story was the first I read and I couldn't stop. You have a great way of writing tha makes the flow easy to read if you know what I mean. Plus you really seam to know the characters which is a plus, cause I've read fan fics where they had no idea how they would act. Keep up the great work and I'm hoping your not just ending it there. =)
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  • From AbandonedAccount666 on May 13, 2005
    ^^ Yay! They admitted their love for each other! .....I think this actually the first time I've commented on this story. O_O I'm sorry. ^^;; I've been reading it for awhile.
    You know, this story reminds me alot of a Yuki/Kyo fanfic I wrote. ^^ Mine's not posted though....I think all I've posted is Naruto fanfics. O_O *pokes her posted stories* I really should post some of my other fanfics from different series...Ack. I'm rambling. XD
    Anyways, the point of all that is: I really like your story! (despite my lack of comments) Please update soon! ^^
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  • From Caerfree on May 10, 2005
    That was really sweet. It's interesting. I'm wondering if the great Akito secret in the manga will be part of this. Not sure. Whatever happens, I'm having fun reading it. I must say though, the crisis of Kyou's nightmares went away rather quickly. I'm curious to see how you tie it all together. Right now, I'm not sure. You get credit though for keeping us all on our toes. Nice work.
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  • From ANON - Quicksilver on May 07, 2005
    Is that it?? Nuuu! I want the rest! It's really good so far. I just hope you finish it. ^.~
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