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From ANON - Anon on April 02, 2008
hey, I know that this hasn't been updated in years but this is an amazing story and I would love it if you would continue!
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From ANON - RowanTree on August 05, 2006
Wow, I'm glad I decided to give this story a try - I usually avoid AU stories.

This is really good, and I'm looking forward to seeing more.

RowanTree
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From ANON - lijana on July 26, 2006
I am fascinated by this story!

I like the characters and I guess though I find the angst is a bit much it is still interested.

I am happy that Waya has been rescued and I hope that this marks the turning point in the fortunes of the kids in this story.

I await the rest!
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From ANON - Kat on December 24, 2005
Darn you for getting my hopes up. T_T Mit-chan! However I am looking forward to more of this! ^_^ Go Waya!!!! And Itsumi!!!!!
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From ladygizarme on December 16, 2005
wow dude.. i have to say, i've seen your story on here for awhile and never read it cuz i thought "how the hell do you put the hng chars into that kinda of environment and story and have it make sense for their characters?? i mean that would have nothing to do with go and go is their life!" (yeah, bad narrowminded thinking on my part there i guess.. sorry!) but today on a whim i decided to read your reviews and they all seemed glowing and what little information about the fic there was in the reviews made me even more curious lol.. and now that i've read the whole thing so far i'm like "damn! it's really good!!" it's definitely a change of pace from the usual hikago fics, but you actually make it work!!

i really like the world you've put together, it's intricate and interesting... and i'm so happy sai's in it!! it's so sad in canon fics, no matter if the rest of the fic is happy, cuz sai isn't with hikaru anymore... and all the bionic powers for everyone is really cool...

now that mitani saw the others and they were sooo close by, will they meet again soon and be able to work together to get kaga?? will mitani be able to leave zama soon??

oh yeah, and as for waya's m-preg.. i usually don't like m-pregs, mostly just because it's SOOO unbelievable even for fiction, but with this future environment and the mutations that can be caused from this type of tampering/manipulating with human/bionic life it actually IS believable.. but now i wonder, now that waya's out, is he gonna keep the baby? does he even want it? has a maternal/paternal bond formed or will he be revolted at the idea of the child of his rapist growing inside him? and if he doesn't want it, how will they abort it? can they even? how far along is he now i wonder? and if he keeps it, what will happen once it's time to deliver? will you include a mutation of his anatomy to make it able to be born naturally? or will he need a c-section? and if so, who will do it?

also, despite the fact that i love the story mostly revolving around what all the boys are going through, i also can't help but think and wonder what's going on with the headmaster and cop from the first chapter.. are they still looking for them? did THEY know they're bionics? or do they now?

lol, sorry, i guess i have too many questions heehee.. but i REALLY like this story and i'm just so interested in what will happen next!! i can't wait til you have more!!

~ LG
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From ANON - Kat on December 09, 2005
Yatta! You gave Mitani a job! XD And as a trapeze artist! I am *insanely* happy he's not whoring any more. ^_^ And I still love your Tsutsui from the bottom of my heart
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From ANON - Horizont on August 17, 2005
Putting your well being first, that's very responsible and shows that you are not an anime character. *lol*
Well I hope you get better soon! Happy recovering! ^_^x

~Horizont
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From ANON - Stranj100 on July 31, 2005
I hope you heal quickly, I'll try and wait paitently for the next installment.
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From ANON - Kyo-nezumi on July 26, 2005
I love this it's one of the best au HnG story I ever read write more soon even though you are writing this for your own pleasure.
It really interesting a little confusing with all the MH?? things but I got it some what keep up the good work.

update soon!
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From ANON - Horizont on July 04, 2005
Woohoooo, yet another chapter! ^_^x Took me a while to review... I went to Paris (which meant no internet) and had a lot to do recently...
...anyway! Akira's ability is really amazing and most of all useful. Not that talking to ghosts isn't...

Right, Dorothy is such a bad influence for dear little Ogata. *hugs him* He's such a good guy, just a bit... not so good, I guess. ^^x
Um, I must say I'm not much into m-�reg, but I can live with it if the story is good, do it's alright. ^^x

I'm looking forward to the next part... I'll have more time to read now. XD
~Horizont
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From ANON - stranj100 on May 21, 2005
I have enjoyed the fic so far and I don't hold grudge for the character deaths. I actually thought your cast of protagonists was too large and unweildy to give each member fair treatment. My only real complaint is that the plot seems to jump a bit with no real explaination, like how did Mitani discover where Kaga was being held, how did he penatrate the compound? showing those would have added to the suspense of the fic, I think. Also where did the clones come from? When was the order for cloning given? Some aspects of this secret project are very clear while others are rather vague. Maybe it's justnoticable to me because I've read this fic as a whole rather than in parts.

Here's a thought I had while reading. I think if the childern if united could with strategy and tactics gain the aid of the adult Bionics, who appear to still be resistant, and combat the covert project. I think, the children themselves would need to work slowly and secretly to avoid capture, but Mitani has shown how easily the can evade and even penetrate their enemies forces, not mention how much more gifted the children seem to be. let's face it these Bionics were designed to be superior if united properly they could easily over come the humans.
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From ANON - Horizont on May 17, 2005
Thx, exams went well... um, except for chemistry, but... whatever.

Ogata is such a cutey! *hugs him* I'm so happy he had an appearance... he doesn't seem all that evil - he's just doing his job. He wouldn't stop plaing go if you told him the game hurt the go stones, right? Oh well, I just like him, his cool attitude, his cold glares... everything! ^^x
Right, no Akira and HIkaru for me. ^^x And all the others suffer (which I should find okay since I'm a fangirl)... I gave up on remembering all the short cuts. So thx for adding the expaination to every chapter!
All in all - short but great! ^_^x
*waits for next chapter*

~Horizont
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From ANON - Horizont on May 07, 2005
Hey there, thy for yet another chapter (and even in time for such a special date)! ^_^x
It's a pity that Hikaru and Akira only showed up a little in this part (I like them both, they're just too cute!), and I really hope that Isumi and Waya will find each other again...
Congratulations on finishing your finals, my last exam is on Wednesday... oh well. Which is why I'm gonna study now.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter - these boys need to stop hiding some da, one way or another.

Ciao!
~Horizont
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From ANON - Horizont on April 26, 2005
Hey there!

Have you ever read "HEX" by Rhiannon Lassiter? I remembered that book when I read the parts about the experiments done with bionics.
Anyway, Hikaru and Akira seem to be lucky, in contrary to Mitani. Poor little one...
Thanks for the ability list, it's helpful! ^_^x
Very well, I'm looking forward to part 5!

~Horizont
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From ANON - Horizont on April 23, 2005
Well, this is kind of a big project, so it deserves a goo review I guess.

I usually like AUs, the more extreme they are the better. I'd say this one is a beautiful Future Fiction work and I loved the idea from the beginning! I wondered how the HnG-characters would fit into this world but it worked out after all. It was a bit hard not to get confused with so many characters each having a past *slightly* different from the show. XD It's all right though.
Never mind the american names (John, Marc). After all that reforming stuff it doesn't sound too far fetched. You sometimes find traditional names and expressions in our modern world, they blend in and no one notices.
I see you've planned the pairings among the boys - on one hand that nice for the readers who are looking for a certain pairing, but on the other hand I think it might have been nice to leave that for the story developing. Though it does sound logical for the boys to know each other one way or another; guess it works either way.
The describtion of the Bionic Project was a bit hard to follow with all that numbers and letters. ^^;; I hardly remember all the traits, but I think I'll do when I read the letters later on.

...I wanted this to be longer, but I got that exam coming up and there's some studying to do (*kicks German book*). I'm looking forward to the next parts! Oh and: I know you said this would focus on the younger boys from HnG, but is there any chance that Ogata might have an appearance? He's my favorite! ^^x

Thx for writing this wonderful story! ^_^x
~Horizont
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