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Reviews for A Grown-up Bedtime Story

By : acsoundwave
  • From ANON - The Green Knight on November 30, 2005
    Oy, the king is dead/dying? Oh gosh I do hope that he's not too injured... and I hope too see more of Kaiba. *grins*
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  • From ANON - l33t gurl on September 20, 2005
    yeah! that was so sexy and medival!!
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  • From ANON - acsound on September 05, 2005
    ...thank you; I was hoping my ending scene would turn out well.

    As for Sensui, at least he got to fight Younger Toguro. :)

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    Some of those thanks should go to Chaotic Mayhem; she helped me tighten up any grammar errors I might have missed. I probably won't need any more betas for this story, but I'll definitely use betas again. (even though one story I've completed now keeps making my betas vanish...but I digress.

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    Did anyone catch the Zatch Bell(Gash Bell) reference?
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on September 04, 2005
    Alas Anubis-sama, I have no criticism! Your story muted my tongue to con-crit! That was incredibly sexy and I totally dig the plot! Though I got sad at the parts with Sensui. *sniffs*
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  • From ANON - Alvida on June 19, 2005
    This is really bizarre. I 'm not at all familiar with YuGiOh so that part is kind of going over my head. I really like, however, how Kuwabara is the somewhat homely but well loved prince. The Jagan appraising his heart was a nice touch.

    I couldn't believe it when I read that Luffy, I assume it was Luffy, was dead. Did any of the prisoners besides Roger survive?
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on June 13, 2005
    Ahh I got to thank Alter for telling me about this newest chapter.
    I'm not too familiar with Yu-Gi-Oh so teh others I'm not to clear on who's who but since this is an alernitive story with the characters having different pesonalities fitting for their part, I can still follow your story-telling.

    I do love this.
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  • From ANON - acsound on June 09, 2005
    That old saying: "A man(woman) is his own worst critic...." Plus, my RL experiences with this are limited. I do know there was very little in the way of conversations once it got to a certain point.

    As for Seto hunting the dragons: In the first ep of YGO: DM, silly Seto (:D) rips a *certain* beloved card in half belonging to MUTOU *Sugoroku*. The dead dragon Sugo is a ref. to that. Mokuba, OTOH, is just curious about the dragons.

    I do thank you for your continued support of this piece. Other than a spot during Rapunzel/Yukina's makeout session with Kuwabara(Kazuma) [cloth-covered mass...her sex!? no...! I think I ran out of better words.], I think I may be improving.

    Hopefully as I continue on this(and a new plot bunny I'm working on), my lemon skills will improve. :)

    Please continue to read & review--keep 'em coming. :D

    ACSound
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on June 05, 2005
    Hehehe... why do people always state that they are bad with certain things? The lemon was neither dirty nor displeasing. In fact, it was what a romantic lemon should be. Hmm, and that bit of Seto and Mokuba going after a dragon... that's just insane.
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on May 10, 2005
    That was completely interesting. I like how you wove this story together.
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