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Reviews for Sharp & Guilty Pleasure Arc

By : greywitch
  • From ANON - Race on May 30, 2005
    Dayum that was hot. A threeway is tricky enough to pull off without having one member be an enemy, congratulations on not only doing it, but also doing it panache. I love how you wove the title into the story. The shifting POV's worked very well, too. I like how there were no loose ends: you explained why Aya would be at a B&D club (love to know more about that mission, though!) and why Crawford did know exactly what trouble Schuldig was getting into.

    And... dayum that was hot.
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  • From ANON - Sexxi Twisted Angel on May 19, 2005
    *gasp* C'est ne pas possible!!! It's over? Well yes MORE triad action between Schu/Aya/Yohji! Loved it.
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  • From ANON - Apollo on May 16, 2005
    I'll say it again - You dirty dog! Here I am, going through all sortsa important emails for my various AFF groups that I'm supposed to mod on and I hit your email and drop them like the proverbial hot cake.

    You made an excellent threesome with Yohji, Aya, and Schu...I've only seen one better (And I dun wanna hurt your feelings, but damn am I honest to a fault), but this is in a close, close second! I dunno if I wanna go back to my emails, reading and rereading this is soooo much better! LoL! Thanks for a great experiance and I wanna know when you post more Weiss!

    Apollo
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  • From ANON - Bishonen no Miko on May 15, 2005
    This was great - I love Schu x Yohji x Aya action and you did not disappoint. I certainly hope you do choose to continue this story (or start another one) in the future. This fic is definitely going on my recommendations list.
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  • From ANON - Lillie on May 15, 2005
    Pardon moi Francais, but fan-fucking-tastic!

    Great ending to a really great story. I loved the characterisation, and I especially loved the way Schuldig kept congratulating himself in Chapter 5. I thought that sounded like something he would do.

    "When he knew I had caught him at it, he’d just meet my stare and raise an eyebrow at me before going back to whatever it was he’d been doing" Also loved this - such an Aya reaction.

    The sex? Hot - extremely hot! Poor Yohji, though. I hope he has a ready excuse for Ken and Omi to explain why he can't sit down for the next couple of days.

    This is probably one of the very few stories I've left reviews for at each update, but that's only because I really did enjoy it so very much. Whether you continue the arc or not isn't for me to say, but rest assured that I'll be interested to see where you turn your talent next.
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  • From ANON - evean on May 14, 2005
    Yes, yes, yes! Sequel sounds great. And your Schu is delicious. Long write you!
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  • From ANON - Apollo on May 11, 2005
    Oh, you dog! You dirty dog...That's all I can even think right now. Normally, as I've told you, I don't like Schu in pairings...but damn........

    It was very well written and I can't wait to see what else you manage to come up with. You explore some interestin' ideas about the boi's and I can just imagine what would happen if and when Schu, Yohji and Aya get together!

    I'm counting on ya to let me know when you next post...I really can't wait!
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  • From ANON - evean on May 07, 2005
    You know you're good, don't you? The story is hot, keep writing, please.
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  • From ANON - Heta Noitio on May 07, 2005
    Nice. Very nice, indeed. If things turn out like they should, we will have some threesome! Right? ^^'
    I like these two new parts, they - 'make sense' aren't the right words. *thinking* Fit? Perhaps that. Schuldig is his always-wonderfully-bastard-himself and Aya is full of surprises. Oh, you described the Iceland _really_ nicely. It's fantastic! (Gotta try to draw it someday...) All the black ice and that... Phew. (I'm actuallly shaking. Gosh.) Oh, where was I anyway?
    The interlude II... Hmm. Hmm-hmm. Now I can't tell how things turn out. I've got no idea. And how is Yohji going to react to all this? I mean that Aya's been taken by Schuldig... Is he going to blame Schuldig for something? For using Aya?
    Hope you get the third chapter ready soon! *smile*
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  • From ANON - Bloodrose on May 06, 2005
    Double Yum! X3

    An upcoming threesome between Schu, Yotan and Aya..? Always my favorite.
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  • From ANON - Lillie on May 06, 2005
    Bravo! When I started reading "Scharfe" I was afraid this was turning into another abuse-Aya-fest, but I should have trusted you not to take the common road.

    Again - two great chapters! It seems that Schuldig is playing match-maker while still getting what he wants. I also thought your portrayal of Aya, his icy defences and the way they were battered down was very believable.

    One - tiny - quibble. The line "I was treated to the site of his naked ass" should be "I was treated to the sight of his naked ass". "Site" refers to a location or place, "sight" has to do with the eyes and seeing. Like I said, it's a tiny quibble in an otherwise fantastic piece of writing.

    I'll be keeping watch for further updates!
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  • From ANON - Sexxi Twisted Angel on May 05, 2005
    That was intense. I like it, and I'm glad you can see Schu not just as a jackass but as a person who feels just like we do. You portrayed both Schu and Yohji very well and I am anticipating your update to this.
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  • From ANON - Heta Noitio on May 05, 2005
    Oh my dear sweet God. *broad smile* I just love this one, it can't be denied. This is going to be interesting - what is Schu going to do about Yohji wanting Aya? What does Aya do? And what is Yoji going to do with Schu wanting him? Anyhow, I like you characters. Even though Schu might be a bit OC, it doesn't matter. In the beginning the way he spoke was a bit odd, but he became better later. ^^ I wish you update soon. Want to see how this ends (and read more sex between Schu and Yotan - has anyone ever told you that you write it almost perfectly?)
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  • From ANON - Iron Dog on May 04, 2005
    Thank you for the kind reviews. I stand completely corrected on the club issue. Thank you for pointing it out. Have no fears that Schuldig will get all mushy. I don't do sap. I'm physically incapable of it. Dangerously obsessed bordering on psychotic, sure (none of the Weiss or Schwartz boys are screwed very tight). SAP,WAFF not in this life time while I still have all my facaulties. Be patient, part 2 is coming soon (with my beta as we speak) and I'm currently writing part 3.
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  • From ANON - Lillie on May 04, 2005
    I love a good Yohji/Schuldig fic and this is truly excellent. I do hope that Schuldig isn't going to turn all mushy and love-struck, but I believe that however you round out this arc, it will be a great read.

    And yeah, it was Takatori who handed out the golf-club beating, not Crawford. The leader of Schwarz stepped in to prevent his two team mates being literally clubbed to death.

    Other than that, I feel spoiled at having found another excellent writer for this fandom and pairing. Thanks for sharing your work.
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