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Reviews for The Sweetest Revenge

By : Crimsonangel
  • From AkitoSouma on July 06, 2007
    That was sweet. I liked the dynamics between them, and I liked how you showed a softer side of Yuki than we get to see very often. The washing machine was quite a creative idea! Pretty much everything about this fic was fantastic. Good job. ^_^
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  • From Ashcat on September 20, 2005
    Ok first off the washing machine idea and scene was awesome.. how funny and I like how yo uaddressed the lube issue instead of just pretending it away! I think it would have been a stronger story without the almost rape thing.. I mean Yuki was mad but rape I dunoo.. but it was so cute with the washing machine I forgave you! I don't understand what a shower bath is though? Are you talking about shampoo or soap or body wash? either way its funny!
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  • From ANON - kayla on July 14, 2005
    that was a bit confusing. one minute shuichi is naked the next you have him fully clothed again. it was an ok story other wise. keep working in it and i'm sure it will get better.
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  • From on June 09, 2005

    Gods! I almost fall from my armchair, when I finally understood what Shuichi gave to Yuki... I was afraid that he really is going to harm Shu. Thank you for stopped him!
    Your fic has really cute, sweet, happy, lovely, amazing ending of the story!

    By the way... washing machine? I never thought about this... hmm.... ;D

    Sorry for all of mistakes but I'm not good in English!
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  • From ANON - Elise on May 16, 2005
    Did you purposely write "and much to Shuichi’s _disease_, very fast and uncontrollable." I mean did you mean distaste or something like? I know spellchecker doesn't know difference on those words. My native language isn't English and as I am dyslexic I tend to read carefully, and that just didn't seem logical to me. There are probably spelling and grammatical mistakes in this short text too.

    I am bad at praising, so.. Anyway, I liked it!



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  • From Cri on May 12, 2005
    there are no words to express how much i loved this story i lurve it. man i ish really hyper. this story had a brilliant literary stly and wonderfull scenes. if a story can make you....feel like that just from reading it is gold it is gold and wonderful
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  • From ANON - KawaiiYasha on May 11, 2005
    This story is stupid funny I was laughing so hard and still am. WoW freaky idea about the washing machine a lil to freaky but anywayz great story is there more?
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  • From ANON - drake220 on May 07, 2005
    i have never laughed so hard at a gravitation fic in my life. oh my god, my stomach hurts...!!! i adored it! though, if i may say, yuki may have wanted to turn suichi frontways against the laundry machine. it makes more of an....impact, shall we say? suichi never lasts long anyways! nice job!!
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  • From ANON - tangerine on May 05, 2005
    Ahh... the first part was scary! I was so worried that Yuki might actually hurt Shu!
    It was lucky he stopped, 'cause I don't think he'll be able to forgive himself if he didn't.
    But the smut scene.... on a washing machine?! That's really hot! ^^
    I love it!
    But I wonder what Shu really got Yuki... the real present...
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