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Reviews for Capturing the Butterfly

By : shuiede

From ANON - sonia on June 10, 2005
that was awesome told ya you can do it. i can see misao kicking aoshi, cool. poor aoshi didnt even realize he has been kicked by he soon to be wife hahahahha. really awesome, i like it. cant wait to see his face when he learns who she really is huh. update soon.
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From ANON - sesshy_lover on June 10, 2005
THATS IT... I LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORY, ITS OFFICIAL!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I STILL HAVE A HANGOVER FROM WHEN I READ CHAPTER 4!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOO KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR I WILL HAVE TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^-^
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From ANON - sesshy_lover on June 06, 2005
IM GIVING YOU FAIR WARNINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS NOT A THREAT IT IS A FRIENDLY SUGGESTION... ^-^ HEHEHE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO REALLY UPDATE OR ELSE ALL YOUR FANS WILL GO ON A STRIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - janet on June 05, 2005
PLEASE!!! IM DYING HERE!!! i keep checking to see if you update every DAY, every HOUR, every MINUTE, every SECOND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT YOU STILL WONT UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RUGAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ILL KILL SOMEONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SERIOUSLY PLEASE UPDATEEE!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM GONNA GO INSANE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ROARRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HURRY UPDATE NOW OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND TAKE YOU TO MY HOME AND TIE YOU UP IN A CHAIR NEST TO A COMUTER AND POINT A DAGGER A YOUR THROAT WHILE YOU WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! no, im just joking... but seriously!!!!! UPDATEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHOULD I SING FOR YOU TO UPDATE!!!!!??? ~SINGING: UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON OH BABY YEAH!!!!!!! COME ON KEEP AT IT NOW OR ILL BE SO SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ REALLY LAME BUT I WAS SINGING THAT... SO HURRY UP BEFORE I HUMILIATE MYSELF AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!! YOU'RE STILL NOT UPDATING!!!!!!!!!... IM WAITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - butterfly on June 02, 2005
I LOVE LEMONS!!!!!!!!!!! YOU FRIGGEN ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^-^ PLEASE WRITE MORE THOUGH... ~.~ BECAUSE PEOPLE WILL GIVE UP ON FANFICS IF IT TAKES TOO LONG... BUT I WILL KEEP READING DONT WORRY!!!!!!!!!!!! ALL MY FRIENDS READ TOO!!!!!!!!!! LIKE SESSHY_LOVER AND SUM1 ELSE!!!!!!... ^-^ PLEASE UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - holy_princess on June 02, 2005
I truely admire this piece... However, I must suggest that if Misao learned that Aoshi was a player, she wouldn't give into him so easily and that would cause further problems, dont you think so? Don't let Misao give in easily or else it will surely be dull... make him force her into loving him... or something... like that... ^-^
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From ANON - sesshy_lover on May 30, 2005
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEED MOREEEEE!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE OR ELSE ILL PLUNGE MY HOOK INTO YOU!!!!!!!!! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *COUGH COUGH!!!* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!... ~SILENCE~ HAHA...HA... *GRUNT...* OK... JUST UPDATE...
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From ANON - Kit on May 29, 2005
I absolutely love this fic. I can not wait to read what happens next since Aoshi will finally meet the "maiden" Carry on, it is great.
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From ANON - sonia on May 29, 2005
hey i like the story so far but there is one thing i hope that will not happen that misao giving into aoshi easily it just makes me feel like that women are weak infront of men when it come to lustful desires, i would rather love to aoshi suffer for not getting what he wants until misao is ready to give it to him and specially when they are both in love with each other. making aoshi suffer will be alot fun u know as he has been getting whatever he wanted for such a long it is just a time for change :D. but hey that was just a suggestion, why would u listen to me its your fic afterall.
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From ANON - arisa on May 26, 2005
i like your story so far. although i hope there will be more aoshi and misao in the next chapter. anyway good job and please update soon^_^
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From ANON - sesshy_lover on May 24, 2005
pleaseeeeee youve gotta update or im gonna go insane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - ct on May 24, 2005
I can't wait when Aoshi gets to know his new jumpy wife... I don't know what you'll make of Misao to be, but I'm waiting it eagerly ^^
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From ANON - Kit on May 24, 2005
This is trully a jolly beginning. Aristrocrats beware... I think it is great and I can not wait for you to introduce Misao as you sadi this was an aoshi/misao fic. Please update soon.
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From ANON - Marlingrl on May 22, 2005
What an excellent story! I love how you've characterized Aoshi. I can't wait to see how you're going to present Misao! I'll be looking forward to the next update.
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From ANON - ct on May 15, 2005
The story's a bit wierd one, but I kind of like it,,, if you write more I promise to review, ja ne ^^
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