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Reviews for On the Street of Dreams

By : Chocho
  • From ANON - Ashcat on December 12, 2005
    Chpt 23: Interesting turn of events. Hrm... I don't see how Shu asking for a long engagement will help their case - they will still be unmarried and he's still a pedophile in the eyes of the law - also how is he of legal age of majority at 17 is that the legal age in Japan for marriage because everything I've seen says that 20 is the age of majority in Japan. Also, by 12 weeks he would be showing especially with how thin he is :/ --- I really have enjoyed the story even if my reviews haven't perhaps always conveyed it, I was just hoping to give you more feedback than "its gr8t plz hurry" :) I can't wait to see what you write next - maybe a sequel to this as there is so much more to tell (more fun happy stuff :) instead of all that angst!). Thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - The soul on December 12, 2005
    Great chapter please keep going would love to read more....I love the married thing that was good....*wants more*
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  • From ANON - Ayeshagirl on December 12, 2005
    Yay marriage! Are you sure there's no chance of the baby actually being Eiri's? The doctor said she wasn't sure if it was 11 weeks... it could be nine...
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  • From ANON - xunxin on December 12, 2005
    LOL!
    seriously, that was hilarious!
    i not sure y yet but it was.
    but how dare you end it there
    i know i was already way long as it is but still.
    come on!
    oh well
    cant wait til next chap next week.
    ...
    o no, it be over next week
    NNOOOOOOOO! *big sob*
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  • From Ashcat on December 07, 2005
    Chpt 22: I liked this chapter better than the previous two. It seemed a little more real. I think I'm going to gag when Eiri askes them to let him marry shu even though he's only known him less than 3 months, thats just kinda stupid. Oh well - hope it ends well!
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  • From ANON - the soul on December 07, 2005
    Keep it up would love to read more....
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  • From ANON - xunxin on December 07, 2005
    ok that was simply awesome but i have a question
    im confused
    i dont get the part about you making up taki's "real name" for a reason
    doesn't make sense
    anyway
    great chapter
    hate you for ending it there
    but it was still cute
    aw they kissed in front of them
    how adorable
    update soon
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  • From ANON - Kiki on November 29, 2005
    I've only read the first chapter, but I'm interested. It's not so often you stumble across a story like this. Quick question... Why neutrals? Why not intersexed? That's what we like to be called. And yes, you're right, there are a lot more of us than one might expect. The last statistic I read was about 5 percent of births are intersexed. That's a lot! (who would guess that that exceptionally girly looking girl in your philosophy class has a penis? or at least part of one, or was born with one... you know what I'm getting at.) Scholars like Butler argue that there are not only more than 2 biological sexes, but more than 3 sexes, that there is an infinate range between XY large penis, large scrotum, to XX small clitorus small labia. And of course everything in between. Unfortunately, there are only 2 socially acceptable genders to cram this variety of sexes into. Anyway, lemmie read the rest of your story...
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  • From ANON - kagomegirl on November 28, 2005
    i think shu would be better off with ryu and tats anyways. i like how eiri told shu how he felt it must help shu to feel better and as cared for and most normal people would. keep it up and update again soon.
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  • From ANON - xunxin on November 28, 2005
    ok im back
    yes of course i loved that chapter
    SO AWESOME
    lemon scene was so beautiful
    (for lack of a better term)
    sad with shus parents
    father an ass hole
    AW how sweet was that?
    update soon
    like friday
    ok ill settle for next monday too *sad frown*
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  • From ANON - xunxin on November 28, 2005
    yeah
    id say something worth while and all but
    ........
    im just too hungry to care
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
    PIZZA PIZZA
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  • From ANON - me on November 28, 2005
    yay an update i hope theres more soon to come
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  • From ANON - Terry on November 20, 2005
    Great update! I loved it! Poor Ryuchi can't play big brother though. I can't wait to read about this "little chat"
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  • From ANON - me on November 19, 2005
    oooo im so curius, btw you know if a legal adult were to maryy a minor \w said minor's parents' consent the relation ship would be legal maybe thats whats going to happen oh well i can only wonder

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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on November 19, 2005
    aiyee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wonderful! please update soon! can't wait to read more (^_^)
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