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Reviews for On the Street of Dreams

By : Chocho
  • From ANON - Mariella on November 07, 2005
    OMG!!! whats gonna happen!! *biting my nails* ooohhh pleas wright fast!
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  • From ANON - me on November 05, 2005
    well at least taki's not around anymore to object to an abortionbut i wonder how eiri will take all this
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  • From ANON - i love athrun on November 03, 2005
    IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!
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  • From ANON - Shadow Rayn on October 31, 2005
    Aw now I feel bad. Can't you just put him in the hospital intead of killing him? What will Ma-kun do?! Although I guess that would change your plot wouldnt it? Well, I just really want to see Eiri's reaction to the baby news most. B)
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  • From ANON - Luciology on October 30, 2005
    I normally read and write Harry Potter fanfiction - Harry/Draco to be specific, then a friend leant me the Gravitation books because the character Yuki Eiri is similar to fandom's version of adult Draco so I thought I would explore this side of fanfiction. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Mpreg is a tricky thing to write well and you have succeeded in creating an indepth tale with elements of canon and an excellent prologue to set the scene. I am hoping that the baby is Eiri's or that he will stand by Shuchi if not. Could you possibly let me know when you think you will update so I can look out for the next chapter?
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  • From ANON - Travellyr on October 29, 2005
    ^_^ Yay! Another chapter. Thank you very much for updating- I've been watching and waiting for more of this. I really, really want to take Shuichi home and cuddle him and feed him. He could snuggle with my dog.

    You've got an excellent sense of narration- how you tell the story is very good. There's never not enough information, and almost never too many details (which is sometimes distracting), so it's very nice. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2005
    How could u be so so sooooooooooooooooooooo very mean?, I wanted it to be yuki's baby. crying why why why?.
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  • From ANON - Rose on October 28, 2005
    Hmm, so when exactly are you going to update? ^_^ Great story, awesomefully written. I'm like... dude... This is like one of the best stories I've like ever read... in like... forever... (and I've read a lot of stories, cuz I don't really have much of a life) Yes, it was absolutely breathtaking... in other words, I want you to update asap. Please? If you do I promise my demon llama's won't attack you and eat your toes. ^_^

    Much Love, Llama's, and Cheese,

    Rose
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on October 27, 2005
    *throws any and all nearby heavy objects at author* HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!?!?!? *sob!* Eiri's not the daddy?! *hugs Kumagoro and cries pitifully* I am glad the Taki has finally met his maker but *sniff* now what will poor Shu-chan do? I can't imagine Shuichi keeping Taki's baby but one never really knows what those blasted plot bunnies are gonna do next. I can't wait for next chappie!!! :D
    Koneko
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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on October 27, 2005
    GODDAMN YOU!!!!!! is being this evil a NATURAL gift?!?!?!?!?!


    *sigh* wonderful chapter...i really...REALLY liked it and you did a fantastic job! can't wait for more...SERIOUSLY






    update soon! (^_^)
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  • From ANON - Terry on October 27, 2005
    It's bad to celebrate someone's demise, and yet I feel like dancing...? Great chapter! I had no idea what happen to this story! So happy it's back!
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  • From ANON - Jaina Uesugi on October 27, 2005
    Duuuuude, history as in Taki's gone, asta la vista? OMG! D: Such a twisting chapter. It took me a couple of reading to actually get what was going on. So many things happening at once =x Very veeeeery good. I can't wait for the update :3 Kepp it up, yo. =O
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  • From ANON - xunxin on October 27, 2005
    yeah you better run
    IM GONNA KICK UR ASS!!
    that was sooooooo mean of you .
    NONONONONONONONONONO!!!!
    oh well
    at least taki is ......DEAD
    yippie yehaw oh yeah
    life is great yes it is
    i'm still mad bout the father thing
    update soon or die!!
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - amethyst on October 22, 2005
    cool... really interesting... pls continue... i hope taki isn't going to hurt shuichi too much...
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  • From ANON - Scarlets on October 21, 2005
    Whoa. This is one hell of a good story! *thumbs up* Wish you could update some more. Good luck! *thumbs up again*
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