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Reviews for On the Street of Dreams

By : Chocho
  • From ThornedAngel on October 20, 2005
    Ok, you mustmustmustmustmustmustmust continue this story. You have had me hanging on every word ever since chapter one and I then I find that it's incomplete, NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story rocks immensly, I freaking love it! So please, for the love of all that is holy, finish the story (preferably with a happy ending)
    That is all I have to say, thank you and goodnight.

    Lee
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  • From ANON - Tsunami-kun on October 19, 2005
    Goddamnit, that Taki is a pain in the ass! Especially poor Shuichi's... OH, I can't take all of the suspense. Update soon. We don't like to be left hanging.
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  • From ANON - aimee on October 19, 2005
    chp1 - woah, hank! lol, i felt like i was watching an episode of doctor quinn medicine woman!! that mixed with gravitation just made me laugh so much! anyways, gonna read the rest of the story now, just wanted to let you know how much that first chapter made me smile :D

    i'll review properly when i've read more and get up to date with the chapters, but the style of writing was really good and i like the ideas you have come up with so im sure i'll love it. n_n xx
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  • From ANON - Rayvenfire on October 18, 2005
    Please update soon. I love this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2005
    Oh please update soon!!! What's Shuichi going to do?! What's Taki going to do?! Will Tatsua find Shu in time. Please I have to know! I'll die of anticipation! Please update. I love this story
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  • From ANON - xunxin on October 17, 2005
    yahooooooo!
    sorry it took me so long to review.
    yes i did read this on....when was it? friday?
    but i wasn't in the mood to think up something to write so here i am.
    yehaw.
    so anyway yeah boring day
    gotta go to work
    this sux. ooooo i mean this day sux but your story was the bomb
    of course it was. duh!
    it's the greatest story ever!!!!
    HEHEHEHEHHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!
    update soon
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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on October 15, 2005
    OMFG! i loved this chapter...haha! Eiri is soooo badassed...loved it. Hate Ayaka...so that worked out well too! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon 'cause the ending was so tense and just...damn...i'm on the edge of my seat over here. you're so wicked.

    (^_^)
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on October 14, 2005
    Hey! Wow! Things are getting really exciting now! I hope for two things right now - (1) that Tatsuha will find Shuichi in time to stop him from making this drastic decision and (2) that Taki will get hit by a bus! :D I'm glad Eiri knows the truth about himself and finally admits that he really does belong with Shu! Update soon!
    Koneko
    P.S. Does this new layout of aff totally suck or what?! BORING! Can we please find another color to use other than gray?!? sheesh...
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  • From ANON - kagomegirl on October 14, 2005
    ooh i do hope shu keeps the baby in the end. eiri deserves shu's baby to be his ^__^ i cant wait to read more. update again soon!!
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on October 11, 2005
    Hey! This is pretty cool! I have to admit though that the first chapter completely threw me. I started reading and thought, "What the Hell is this mess? An Old West story in the Gravitation section? Somebody must have mis-filed their story somehow." Then I saw the names Eric and Sara. "A-ha!", I realized, "Now I see the connection!" Eric and Sara = Eiri and Shu. Mystery solved. I don't know if you chose Eric and Sara on purpose or not but I thought it was a very clever choice of names. :D

    As for Shuichi, *sigh* the poor guy just can't seem to catch a break. I feel so bad for him - rejected by everyone (esp Eiri, that ass!) and pregnant. (I hope he finds the strength to keep the baby!) I just wanted to slap Eiri for making that comment on neutrals! But what can one expect from the cold-hearted bastard we've all come to know and love! *snerk!* The way that you've woven just enough canon into this story gives it a kind of cohesiveness such that you kind of know what to expect from the characters but not quite. Pure genius if you ask me!! It's like the story we all know so well just tweaked a bit and expanded upon. Love it, love it!

    As for one the possible fathers of Shu's baby, I was curious about something. Kizou made a comment about a kid being "a painful reminder of what he would never be able to have". Does that mean that he can't father children? That would kinda eliminate him as a possible father leaving Eiri and Taki (eww! Taki. yuk! nasty!). I'm cheering for Eiri to be the daddy in case you can't tell! ^_~ Eiri needs to get his act together first tho! :)

    Update ASAP!
    Koneko

    P.S. Tatsuha and Ryuichi are really great in this story. They come across as a loving couple that just naturally fit together and compliment each other. I can't believe I just wrote something positive about Tatsuha!! Normally I can't stand Tatsuha because I adore Ryuichi and don't like seeing him with that gigolo Tatsuha! meh! Yes, I'm a nut-case but at least I admit my faults! :P UPDATE SOON!! :D
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  • From ANON - dita on October 07, 2005
    hi! I hope you are aware that the whole pregnancy thing by Mr Lee Mingwei is a hoax. You could go here http://urbanlegends.about.com/library/weekly/aa100400a.htm .
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  • From ANON - catmum56 on October 06, 2005
    Whew! Thought I'd lost it there for a minute! ::waves hand up and down:: You work on your assignment, I'll wait. ::grin:: Hope everything's going well at school. Your next chapter will be greeted with greater anticipation, that's all. :)
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  • From ANON - Silverone on October 06, 2005
    I hate to tell you this but, the second site is a hoax.

    Mr. Lee's isn't pregnant. If you search through the pages, you'll eventually find a disclaimer stating that it's not real.

    snopes.com has the full scoop on it.

    http://www.snopes.com/pregnant/malepreg.htm
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2005
    MPregs are always written by female authors who are desperate to have kids themselves, and who project their own psychological frustration onto their characters. The whole idea of MPregs is stupid, just like Mary Sues. Male authors, even gay ones, NEVER do anything as ridiculous as MPregs; it's a genre confined to women with berserk hormones. And anyone who understands pregnancy in real life thinks 'queasy' instead of 'cool.' The thought of a male body carrying a child it's not built for is enough to make you vomit in disgust, if you have any real grasp of biology. It's a Frankenstein monster of a notion.
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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on October 05, 2005
    why, hello my fellow roman catholic. do you know that in the same book where it states that homosexuality is wrong...it also says that ANYONE who curses their parents should be put to death? hm. how many of those so-called religious folks should be dead now? i'd say about half of them...at least. *sigh* i hate close minded people. they suck. and they get on my last nerves. anyways...loved the a/n...plenty of passion there buddy. and thanks for the background info too...extremely interesting stuff. and for a person who IS religious (that would be me) and a Roman Catholic...tell your sister (with all due respect) to sod off. god will love people who are good at heart...he doesn't give a shit who you love or how so long as you are doing what you feel is right and will not harm others. he only cares if you're good. and if she can't see/understand that...then she isn't truly understanding her religion...and that makes her too close minded, too ignorant, and too damn sad...

    anyways! UPDATE SOON!!!!! (^_^) put first do your class work...THEN UPDATE SOON!

    :)
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