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Reviews for On the Street of Dreams

By : Chocho
  • From ANON - Azure on October 05, 2005
    HEY...wheres my next chapter....ahh i look forward to this.... (;.;) Anyway lol your little talk on religion...you sound just like me....ya i think the bible has been tweekd and added to by one to many (straight)males for it to actually be completely coherent or sane. Dont fall into that hole your family wants for you...keep your own view on life... (god did give free will right?) =p and yes i to have heard about that male pregnancy deal...on tv..crazy stuff...but hey...people do weirder im sure ^^
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  • From ANON - Bisexual Pygmie on October 05, 2005
    I'm sorry I'm such a terrible reviewer, I really enjoy this story, and I haven't read any gravitation stuff in a long time. I was going to review eventually, but I can never think of what to say. This actually is a response to your recent authors note. I hope that you haven't let all those wacky fundementalists turn you away from God. The Catholic Church, as I'm sure you know, does not make claims that anything in the bible, especially the old testament, is one-hundred percent the gospel truth (ha ha I made a pun:-)The primary church message is to love everyone wether they share our beliefs or not. It is the overly-zealous and ignorant who blindly take all the bible says at face value and turn what is essentially a religion thats entire basis is in Jesus's teachings of love and tolerance for everyone. I'm sorry if you feel reading this was a waste of your time, but the truth is their are plenty of non-religious people who are against things like homosexuality, they just don't have misguided self-rightous basis for there arguments. It is the people who are wrong that speak the loudest, and they turn many people, some of my friends included, away from the church. The church needs people like you and me who don't have these irrational prejudices. I am not trying to evangelize you, or convince you to 'fight the good fight,' but please don't judge the church on the biases of some of it's members. The church is still a body of people, and people are falliable, but by turning our backs on the church we are just giving them more 'proof' that they are more righteous, and that is not the way to stop the discrimination and double standards in the world.

    Oh, and now that you know I am here I promise to try and review more often.
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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on October 05, 2005
    UPDATE! I COMMAND THEE TO UPDATE NOW!


    er....please?
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  • From ANON - Reader on September 30, 2005
    This was realy a good one!!! I am waiting for next part!
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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on September 28, 2005
    ahhhhhhh! no no no no no! continue! CONTINUE! omg omg omg omg omg



    you are SO evil.


    grr.
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  • From on September 28, 2005
    WOW!!!! That was a shocker!!! Poor Eiri, now I bet he'll think twice about what he thinks about neutrals, now! I hope Shu's not really going to get an abortion; Shu doesn't need his parents, all he needs is Eiri, Ryu, and everyone who cares about him to help him get through. Damn, this story's gettin' good, so update soon, okay!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Azure on September 28, 2005
    ^^yup yup keep it rollin! you have sum good stories you know...! thanks for sharing them (o.o)b
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  • From ANON - Akemi on September 28, 2005
    That was a very interesting chapter!
    The cliffhanger was cruel.
    But I loved how you justified Eiri's intolerance towards neutrals. So he thought his mother had abandoned him, Mika and Tatsuha. hmmmmmm
    Eavesdrop surely is a nice way to find things out.
    He has to go after Shuichi now and apologize! And if this clinic is what I suspect it is...you have to do this fast! BEcause Shu has to have this baby!
    More please.
    Kisu
    Akemi

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  • From ANON - xunxin on September 28, 2005
    i just love to say how much i loved this chapter and all the good stuf.
    but...
    IM WAY TOO HUNGRY FOR THAT!! I NEED FOOD!!
    anyway.. im tired.
    great chappie, loved it, poor shu, go eiri.
    there i did it. happy?
    lol.
    update soon.
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  • From on September 24, 2005
    Poor Shu! His parents are assholes, and poor Tatsuha and Ryu-chan! I hope Tatsu finds Shu soon, before Shu does something stupid! You have to update, and we NEED to see more Eiri!!!! Well anyway update soon!
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  • From ANON - me on September 22, 2005
    this kid had better be eiri' so that after words some one can smack him for hating nuetrals and putting shuichi through this
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  • From ANON - Reader on September 22, 2005
    Whaaa...!!! I am crying! Poor Shu!!!
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  • From ANON - starlight on September 21, 2005
    Lov ur story pleases let Eiri be the father am putting my trust in u. llllllooooooooovvvveeeeee uuuuuuu!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on September 21, 2005
    a good author can invoke such strong emotions in his/her readers. and i must say...i'm fucking pissed and sad as hell! dude...this was an amazingly emotional chapter and i hope you update again VERY soon! congrats on a job well done...until next time!
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  • From ANON - catmum56 on September 21, 2005
    Nice to see that Shindou-san is running true to form. What a jerk. Oh, wait, this is AFF! I can say he's a shithead!! I like the scene between Tatsuha and Ryuichi. Their emotions are well-played. And lastly, vulnerable Shuichi. So much to go through at 16. Poor little guy. Hope Tatsuha finds him in time to get him to his 4pm doctor's appt. That would be a good thing. :)
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