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Reviews for On the Street of Dreams

By : Chocho
  • From ANON - dae on September 21, 2005
    omg this chapter was so heartbreaking...the part where shuichi was crying daddy and stuff and mama that was like so said i actually cried.i love this fic update soon.
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  • From Silverone on September 21, 2005
    I like the fact that you are dealing with the social issues male pregnancy would raise.

    As for who should be the father, all I will say is that having Eiri be the dad would be a little cliche, but in the end it's your story and you have to write it the way you feel is best.
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  • From ANON - Akemi on September 21, 2005
    That was really cruel ;_;

    I love cruelty ^^, followed with a proper happy end of course! I also love mpregs so pleaseeeeee the baby's father have to be Eiri!!!! He's already stated his distaste about males getting pregnant, imagine if the baby isn't his! Please write the next chapter as soon as you can!

    Wish you lots of inspiration!
    Akemi


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  • From ANON - xunxin on September 21, 2005
    WAAAAAHHHHH!!!
    WAAAAAHHHHH!!!!
    WAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!
    WAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
    WAAAAAHHHH!!
    got a tissue? oh how sad for shu. his father is an asshole!!
    oh by the way, EIRI EIRI EIRI EIRI EIRI!!
    NOt taki or Kizaou, that would just be discussting if you ask me.
    but then again it could be one o them then shu looses the beby but the he gets preg aagain by eiri.
    yep that would be a great story
    LOL!!
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  • From ANON - Reader on September 21, 2005
    This is my absolute favorite!!! Please give me more!!! *puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - thescream18 on September 16, 2005
    Please, Please, Please update soon. I'm in love with this fanfiction and would like very much to read more.
    I'll be your best friend.
    :) :) :)
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  • From ANON - Quichi on September 11, 2005
    So many people bastardise Taki and ASK, I'm rooting for him to mellow. Especially if he thinks it's possible he's the father. It would be cool if he was a competition for Shuichi, make Yuki wake up about his feelings!
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on September 10, 2005
    wow, poor shu ! hope this ends up well for him! yuki got to be the father! i hope!
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  • From ANON - Shadow Rayn on September 10, 2005
    i hope the baby isnt taki's (it'd be better if it was kizou's but only slightly). Please let eiri come to his senses! oh n i have a question. How can a woman be a neutral, since you said eiri's mother was one in ch.4. Im jus curious.
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  • From ANON - catmum56 on September 09, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAcccckkkkkkk! Okay, that was stupid, but really, what a place to leave us! I'm so happy when I see how small the gauge is on the right side slide, but then it goes by so quickly. ::pout:: I appreciate the time you're taking to produce a quality product (and belive me, you are doing that), but the wait is sheer agony here! I know, patience builds character, right? No, you just like to torture us all. Oh, well, I just come back and read the current offering several times each week. Until next time...
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  • From ANON - me on September 09, 2005
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on September 09, 2005
    you.....are....by far......the most....EVIL....person........EVER! OMG! please update again soon. i nearly killed my keyboard by drooling all over it. hehe. seriously, this was an amazing and very TENSE chapter....can't WAIT for the next one. hope it's very soon! (^_^)
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  • From ANON - xunxin on September 09, 2005
    ya know that last comment made it sound like a tv show or something.
    anyway great chapter.
    so tat told ryu bout his brother?
    well he didnt take it too well
    ..........GREAT CHAPTER I LOVED IT!!!!!
    o y o y o y did you have to end it there?
    NO FAIR!! more i want more.
    i know i gotta wait til next week but thats just too long.
    i want more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Emily on September 09, 2005
    Awwww... finally mpreg is here. Wohoo!!!! I hope Eiri wont be too angry to Shu-chan. It's not really Shu's fault he's preggers. I, by the way, totally love mpreg.
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  • From ANON - Jade on September 09, 2005
    I'm looking forward to Yuki finding out about Shu's pregnancy and I hope that it changes his view of the situation. Pls. update soon.

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