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Reviews for Hiro Breaks It Down!

By : Rhonda
  • From ANON - dragon on May 17, 2005
    LOVED IT!!!! I laughed, I cried, I had to take a cold shower.... :)
    I'll be looking for your next fic.
    You Rock!
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  • From ANON - Sandi59 on May 17, 2005
    Loved this fic! Nothing in this fiction was predictible, you kept me guessing. I love the plot twists. Everyone was kept in character. I enjoyed the Shu/Hiro scenes, they were very touching. The tangent you took Suguru on was cute. I look forward to your next fiction.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2005
    Damm girl good story and I love the hotel names! I could have used one like that a few times in my life time. HEHE!! keep writting!!
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  • From ANON - Languish_Dreams on May 16, 2005
    O.O;

    Oh my dear God.

    I don't think I've laughed out loud that hard in a long LONG time. *L* The entire thing was absolutely brilliant! I don't think I've ever read a Gravi fic that was as thought out and well written as this! :D And the inclusion of extra characters was just right, not too much attention paid to be boring, but enough to show the action and consequences going on around everyone. *cackles* Sooo funny! I think I nearly peed my pants when you said the delivery guy changed his name to Ben Affleck. *L* At first I wasn't even going to read it, because I'm such a totally obsessed Shu/Yuki pairing fan it's borderline scary...but I gave it a chance and I dare say that I would have loved it all the same even if Shu had decided to stay with Hiro.

    The only problem I had was chapter length. My eyes tend to get fuzzy on long chapters and skip around on their own accord, making me lose bits and pieces and forcing me to re-read sentences over and over again. But it's a brain problem on my part, not a complaint towards you. *L* It was definitely believable, I could almost see this happening as an episode. *L* You even managed to keep Yuki in character, despite the tears (I can see it happening). The 'Secret Inn' bit was hilarious; I choked laughing at some of the names and I loved how Shu and Hiro didn't just jump straight into the sack, but talked before and after and remained sensible and believable throughout.

    Needless to say, if this was posted on fanfiction.net, it would be on my favorites list in a heartbeat. :D I especially loved the epilogue and how Shu and Yuki's relationship developed slowly, instead of Yuki doing a complete turn-around like in most fics. Utterly wonderful all together! I hope you do more! :D

    I think I've rambled on enough. *L* To put it shortly: I absolutely loved it! ;D
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