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Reviews for Hiro Breaks It Down!

By : Rhonda
  • From ANON - lampi on April 09, 2007
    WONDERFUL!!! I love your story, I nearly cried while reading... thanks a lot for writing^^

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  • From ANON - Dambae on November 18, 2006
    *Snickers* Love the reference to Parker Lewis. I used to watch that show every Sunday night. Thanks for the laughs on a well-written story!
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  • From ANON - ralphiere on January 27, 2006
    OMG you're good. REALLY good. *grins*
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  • From ANON - Shemai on November 11, 2005
    I was going to wait until morning to review...but I decided that this was too good to let myself forget about! I really really loved this fic! It's currently my favorite Gravitation fic and I just thought I should tell you that it was a great story! Parts of it almost made me cry and others just made me grin. The way you formatted the Epilouge was really awesome too! ^-^ I hope to read more from you soon! Thank you for being so kick ass and writing such an awesome fic!
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  • From ANON - jarath on November 06, 2005
    I loved it and I also loved the bet ^.^ your a great auther and I need some of those pants
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on November 04, 2005
    OMG this has to be the best story on all of aff!!! I bow to your genius! *genuflects reverently* The "Big Event" scene was absolutely the best! Hiro singing?! sweet!!! Ryuichi in lace pants?! *falls into drooling fangirl stupor* If I wasn't laughing my ass off I was completely inthralled by the drama of it all! You're an amazing writer and I can't wait to read "The Bet" next! Even if it's only half as good as this one, it's still gonna be fantastic! Oh! How could I forget the snapshots at the end! Kumagoro taking pictures at the park, Fujisaki with a 'Daddy' ring on, Tohma in a flowery apron feeding Audrey III, and let us not forget the still shot of bishounen on the move - unbelieveably drool-icious!! F***ing great in fact!! I can't tell you how hard I laughed at the Ben Affleck jab or the guy burning down the restaurant! Hilarious!! I also gotta give ya props for Miko and the Get Backers reference. Nice! I will never be able to look at a cheese ball ever again without thinking of K's gift! :D
    Loved it!!
    Koneko
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  • From ANON - evilqueen13 on November 01, 2005
    I love this almost as much as I love my “Hello Kitty” limited special collectors edition wheelman luggage case.

    Seriously your writing style and sheer genius for humorus detials completely blows my mind. It's all so out there in a million different directions yet you keep it all together moving in the right direction smoothly while never missing a beat. You should be writing real books instead of free fanfiction.
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  • From Ashcat on October 31, 2005
    Overall, this was a very funny story! I think its rather over the top but then again the humor was priceless! I loved your epilogue and the ending photos and credits that was brilliant! Please post more fics soon!
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  • From ANON - ffpanda on September 24, 2005
    HOLY GOD! Okay, I've been reading and writing fanfiction for about 15 years now. Beginning with a little notebook and a He-Man/She-Ra fetish. I've probably read several thousand stories over the years...starting with the fanzines you could buy at Star Trek conventions, moving to Yahoo groups that had memberships in excess of 500 Buffy authors, and finally hunting down every single individual personal fanfic site on any given obsession of the moment out there on the web. I can honestly say that this was one of the best written stories I've ever read!

    You made this story come alive! I saw every single scene unroll before my eyes. I felt every emotion along with the players. I am impressed beyond words. I have a list of 5 stories that have held my heart as being the all time best fanfics ever written, and this one has just increased my list to 6. I know I'll revisit this story over and over again over the years.

    I read The Bet first (GREAT story!), and then headed here to this story. I'm so glad I did. Worth every minute it took me to read it - actually, it's worth so much more.

    But you know what really put me over the edge? Your Ending Credits - sheer genius!!! You have a life-time fan in me!!
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  • From on September 14, 2005
    ....That was fucking awesome. It actually made me laugh out loud, sitting here and reading it. And I have the flu, so that's not all that easy. ^^ Absolutely amazing. :D
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  • From ANON - AbstractConcept on August 10, 2005
    Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. The crossover at the end was the perfect way of giving the reader a nod and a wink at the finish. What I wouldn't give for a trip to that hotel! I'll be reccing this for sure.
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  • From ANON - AbstractConcept on August 10, 2005
    So far I'm only up to chapter 2, but this is absolutely hysterical! Thanks so much for making me snicker at work. It's been a long time since I read something this entertaining--frankly, I think it's better than the real Gravitation.
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  • From on July 30, 2005
    ok damian is so reading this one to you are an awsom auther and I love Miko she is just to cool gotta love anyone who sees all and sees nothing at the same time ^.^
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  • From BloodyFootsteps on June 04, 2005
    I must say this is a very creative story, it kept me amused the way through. I just loved the idea of the end credits! Keep up the good work!

    Travis
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  • From ANON - Quichi on May 27, 2005
    you are DAMN cool!! I love the end credits!!! I shall keep an eye out for anything you write from now on
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