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Reviews for Double Take

By : dragonphire99
  • From ANON - catti-dono on December 17, 2006
    This has a makings for an awesome story...hope you take it off of hiatus and finish it....catti
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  • From ANON - Saigh on July 20, 2006
    wow...this is...wow. Hard for me to read for a start. I hate seeing Dee and Ryo with broken trust, the hardest part is the fact I know what's going on and I wanna scream at Ryo telling him what's going on. Hope it's continued soon! and your other stories as well. Please just say there will be no rape or character deaths. I can't read those
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  • From ANON - Crimson on October 15, 2005
    yo
    la li ho!!

    hey LadyDragonphire! it's me....!

    the story's heating up...! update already! lol i wanna see what's coming up next... so yeah!!

    take care

    Crimson
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  • From ANON - bgs on September 14, 2005
    wrGGGGGGGGGGGGWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWCCCCCCCCCCCCN NNNNNNNNNNN
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  • From ANON - firgodes7 on September 02, 2005
    Very interesting so far. I like how you are trying something new writing wise. Must say you are doing a pretty good job so far. I am looking forward to seeing what the next chapters will be like.
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  • From ANON - Mihoshi on August 23, 2005
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
    I think I know what is going to happen.
    Somehow, Dee is going to get kidnapped, and taht guy is going to take over as the new Dee.
    But there is still one flaw (hopefully) in the plan; the necklace that Ryo gave him!
    If the guy forgets to take it, Ryo will get even more suspicious, the things will really start to heat up
    *SREAM, SQUEEL, SHRIEK WITH HYSTERIA*
    THIS STORY IS GOING TO BE SO AWSOME!!!!
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  • From ANON - #1 pussy fuck on June 26, 2005
    This story got me so wet it was Niagra Falls in my pants!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Booze Hound on June 21, 2005
    I did a double take once...i was walking and saw this oddly proportioned man...striking brown mullet, beer belly from too much jack daniels, and a really fanciful hard on...then i realized i was just looking in the mirror. Gosh do i love myself! And i love these 2 hot guys also. Next to me, these 2 hunks are it. Keep up the great writing ladydragon. I am still waiting for us to cyber.
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  • From ANON - Jollyolly on June 18, 2005
    Ryo suspicious..Dee bewildered...the plot thickens. Great chapter! Keep writing! ^^
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  • From ANON - Jollyolly on June 11, 2005
    Oh no! Ryo and Dee's happy home will be torn asunder!? Okay, have an uneasy feeling this David person is one sick individual...that makes your story all the more addictive a read! ^^ Please keep up the excellent work that you do...will be looking forward to seeing what happens next!
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  • From ANON - shikari on June 10, 2005
    oh no!!!!!!!! i see bad things in ryo and dee's future. i love this story write more soon pleassse
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  • From ANON - Blueclarity on June 10, 2005
    Hey,
    Another awesome fanfic! This is so hot! The sex scenes are great, but the dialogue is too! I can't wait until you put up chapter three. Good luck and keep writing!
    -Kenz
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  • From ANON - Blueclarity on June 10, 2005
    Hey,
    Another awesome fanfic! This is so hot! The sex scenes are great, but the dialogue is too! I can't wait until you put up chapter three. Good luck and keep writing!
    -Kenz
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  • From ANON - Blueclarity on June 10, 2005
    Hey,
    Another awesome fanfic! This is so hot! The sex scenes are great, but the dialogue is too! I can't wait until you put up chapter three. Good luck and keep writing!
    -Kenz
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  • From ANON - Crimson on June 08, 2005
    yo
    la li ho!!

    it's me na no da!!! i like the plot already!!!

    keep up the good work na no da!!!

    Crimson
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