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Reviews for Boarding School

By : mizu
  • From ANON - Shirubaa Kitsune on June 11, 2005
    *squee* I WAS WOUNDERING WHAT WAS TAKEING YOU SO LONG TO GET TO THIS PART! HURRY HURRY HURRY AND WRIGHT ONEGAI!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 10, 2005
    Wow!! More please!!
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  • From ANON - Mikage-chan on June 10, 2005
    Eeep!! I like, I like, I like!! Dee and Ryo are just so cute!!

    I haven't been on line in a while, so I haven't been able to read and review until now.

    There is one thing that I'd like to point out, but I don't want to be annoying in doing so. Don't worry, it's nothing bad, just something that caught my attention as I was reading. In chapter four you wrote that 'la petite belle' means 'pretty little girl.' I guess it could also mean that, if you were using a rough translation of the statement (which I'm guessing you did since you wrote /It meant roughly ‘pretty little girl’/). I'm pretty sure a rough translation doesn't bother anyone (since no one is perfect) and it really didn't bother me at all, but I figured I could give a more accurate translation of the statement any way. 'La petite belle' would actually translate to 'the small/little beauty,' (which I guess works just as well). If you wanted to say 'the pretty little girl' it would be 'la petite belle fille.' Or you could substitue in the word 'jolie' for 'belle' and it would mean the same thing.

    Again, I'm not trying to be annoying by pointing out something that's so small!! I love this story so far!!! So cute!! There's just something about two hot guys... lol! And I just love the whole school theme! Having it set in a different time period makes it more interesting! I myself have found it a little difficult to write an AU high school fic. Myabe it's because I never liked high school (bad memories). Anyway, I'm rambling now. Update soon!!!

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  • From ANON - rj1ofakind on June 10, 2005
    Yes! She had time to write. What another wonderful chapter - but wait guilt - she should be doing her papers - Yikes. But yes, another wonderful chapter.
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  • From ANON - monica on June 10, 2005
    i am looking forward to the next chapter.. i can't even express my anticipation.. ^sigh^.. i will be patiently waiting.. it is a virtue.. patience, i mean.
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  • From ANON - rj1ofakind on June 08, 2005
    As I sign on the web, the thought pops in my head - did she do it today? Did she have time to post something. I click the mouse and punch the buttons that will take me to the page. Chewing on my bottom lip, I anxiously await to see yes? No :( I sigh. O well, since I am here I can read that last chapter again. I read - sigh. Happyberry makes me so HAPPY. Please continue
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  • From ANON - Lady Dragonphire on June 07, 2005
    Great story! Looking forward to reading more from you. Keep up the excellent writing. :)
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  • From ANON - monica on June 07, 2005
    please update soon.. this is the only thing that keeps me going throughout the whole day.. heh.. you truly are an excellent writer.. or wutever you call yourself..
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  • From ANON - Jill on June 07, 2005
    I like how you've weaved this together so far, and killed off Ryo's parents in an entirely different (yet realistic to the plot) way. I think though that you meant to use consolation, not consolidation in this chapter. ^^
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  • From ANON - Jill on June 07, 2005
    I really like this story and your take on the whole high school scenario. Howcer, I don't think the word youwere looking for in this chapter was unbraided - I think you meant upbraided - to criticize severly, find fault with.
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  • From ANON - Mitsugi on June 06, 2005

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  • From ANON - sammy on June 06, 2005
    loved it
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  • From ANON - monica on June 06, 2005
    heh.. on like.. the 5th chapter when ryo said i love you to dee, i was like.. aww man.. another fic wer ryo 's a really sappy person and falls very easily for dee.. but then!?!?!.. on this latest chapter.. it was soo incredible because you found a way where ryo still has doubts and worries.. i thought it was excellent.. standing ovation for that one.. ^clap clap clap^..
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  • From ANON - Stranj100 on June 05, 2005
    You are my favorite AU FAKE author. I'm enjoying this fic alot. It reminds me of Dead Poets Society, one of my favorite movies. I loved Aaron in the manga and I'm enjoying him here. I hope doesn't meet a similar tragic fate.
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  • From Jollyolly on June 04, 2005
    First time reviewing a story! I love how you set the story at a boarding school...You've written the characters very well and the story just flows wonderfully! The love scenes are heart-thumping and sweet!^^ Can't wait for the next chapters so keep 'em coming!
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