Click Here!

Reviews for Learning to Fall

By : Suteishichic
  • From ANON - Ohtori-chan on August 03, 2005
    I read your story, and I really like the plot, characterness and everything, I just really have one pet peeve. There are points, fewer at first but more frequent as it progresses, where you use the present progressive tense. I personally find this tense rather distracting, and prefer it when it is in the past tense. But then again, almost everyone seems to write in the present, so it could be just me. Great plots and everything though! I did enjoy reading it!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - centi on July 28, 2005
    nya um...this is my first fic I've read and actually liked at adultfanfiction. Haha....I'm not even normally one for fanfics, and this wasn't originally my fave pairing...but somehow you have made oishi and eiji capture my heart. I've even been able to forget entirely some of my writing pet pieves to read this, becuase the story is very interesting. A lot of stories are just sex, and while you have a lot of citrus going, its very loving emotional, and touching. Wonderful work and I'll keep going until the end even if it takes me forever X__x. Kudos.

    ~Centi
    Report Review

  • From ANON - suzy on July 13, 2005
    Eto, I think you did a very good job of coming up with a lot of explanations for things that aren't made clear in the story so far as i've seen (~138 ep) altho i don't know if there are answers that you're getting from the manga? which is very far behind.

    But it's a great back story filler, of why and how, and the characters are very...in character with any situations being explained by the context as to why not. It' very well written and i've enjoyed reading it a lot. ~blinks~ altho' i wonder what kind of books Eiji is reading, i know scifi/fantasy anthologies of short stories but...hmm what kind.

    Well done characters ~grin~ i like that in a story. It had it's sad and dramatic parts but then you're dealing with sad events and dramatic characters. I really like that it answers questions...such as Eiji's bandage...

    Report Review

  • From ANON - ladygizarme on July 06, 2005
    wow omgoddess dude, i fucking loved this story!! all these short 2-3 chapter fics and mostly one shots and then i find this treasure with my fav pairing and 71 chapters!! i couldn't stop reading it!! i had to force myself to sleep occasionally during the 4 days it took to read!!! i loved it! your writing is excellent(so much so that i completely didn't mind the occasional typos and such, which usually drive me nuts but not here lol), and the story, emotions, situations, little idiosyncrasies, and ohhh! just everything was so well done!! especially the interactions between two new couples and how different history baggage can effect a relationship, etc... it's so funny cuz despite all that, this story is essentially way more sappy than anything i usually can stand to read, yet it's now one of my favorites because the sappy sweetness was *right* like, a lot of stuff between oishi and eiji really reminded me of me and my husband it was amazing! (i laughed at myself for a bit thinking how cutesy we were--still are i guess lol--because that's how oishi and eiji were together, cutesy but it was so right! and you didn't let it be unrealistically cutesy because they still had drama just like everyone, even me and my hubby, does) anyway, i was on chapter 68 last night and talkin to my girl houseki on yim and telling her how it was almost over and i didn't want it to be! she was like "you've been reading it the last 3 days nonstop and still don't want it to be done? wow!" i've been talking to her and quoting things i loved from it (though not everything cuz she needs to read it for herself, and will once she finally sees the anime :p, but still i quoted waaaay more than i usually do from fics..) ever since i started reading it and i was so gushy i was like begging her to just read a bit about PoT and let me tell her basic character descriptions and such so she knew who was who and basically what was going on, but she didn't want to be lost so she still hasn't read it and it was like TORTURE to not tell her about everything and gush every single second! seriously!! anyway, so she was giggly over how much i love it and i was like "yeah, i've been reading it this long, and it's 71 ch's and i still want more! even though i know after this is the sequel i can read, but i still want more! lol" so, yeah, anyway, if ya can't tell, i love you and this story and hope you write even more in the future!! thank you so much for writing this!! *glomps you*

    ~lg
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Tsuyomi on July 04, 2005
    I really loved reading this fic...I've never even seen PoT, but I've fallen in love with this fic. lol I like your style of writing; it's different. Like the previous reviewer said, it's simple (without being *too* simple) but I like it better than some of the other writing styles I've read. This is definitely one of the best fanfics I've come across. It's not just meaningless smut, it's a really sweet, touching fic. (One of my favorite moments was when Eiji was telling Fuji about learning to fall...one of the many scenes I've read multiple times. ^^;;) I'm looking forward to reading Learning to Land~ Thanks for a good read!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - dragon on June 12, 2005
    Very, very good. Can't wait to read Learning to land...going there now. :)
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!