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By : Suteishichic

From SCA on March 08, 2009
I love this story! and it's so hard to find good PoT fanfiction, that doesn't end, like really fast! there's like, no plot! just some small similarity to what could be called a plot or a story line and some characters development if the author actually bothered to take the time, but he/she/it (because sometimes the story is so badly writen, that you know, just know, it's got to be a it!) never really bothers, 'cause they just want to write some steamy sex scene! And there's nothing wrong with a sex scene, even better if its a steamy, well writen sex scene, but after a while it just gets boring! your story never does. congratulations! you have my eternal admiration.
*bows* this honored fanfiction reader, humbly bows before good, very good, PoT fanfiction, written by such an extraordinary author as yourself.
continue the good work! hope to read more of your works soon!
wishes of joy and inspiration for you!
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From Gwenfarr on April 09, 2008
Love this story. I've been avoiding it because its so long, but I find now I'm liking it for exactly the same reason. I adore how you've characterized Eiji, and how they sleep with each other on the pjone. Too cute! Chapter 12!? "Eiji....wait for me...." SO Hot I'm still sweating LOL. Great jo.
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From Sharibet on May 16, 2007
Wow...I stayed up until 4am, reading this, and I'm still only up to chapter 52!

But I wanted to tell you how much I'm enjoying the characterizations in this story, and how you're chronicling the development of the various relationships. Nice, meaty stuff, and you do some lovely (and non-purple-prose) love and sex scenes. Thanks for sharing your stories...I'm glad to see that there's a sequel, and I look forward to reading that, too.
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From ANON - Krystal_Epyon on November 12, 2006
Whew! Finished!

^.^ I hope we find out what Tezuka's latest b'day present for Fuji is in the next fic. [Odd of mem I know.]

So, the kissing test was really that very first kiss that Oishi gave to Eiji expecting just to be teaching him? That's adorably sweet! Of course, everything about those two is.

Ooh, nice job with Fuji's break down, too. And Tezuka's reaction. :D

Off I go to start reading Learning ot Land...

Krystal_Epyon@yahoo.com
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From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2006
Heheh. You're probably tired of my rambling reviews. I know I would be, but I only review when I feel I really need to, and I don't do so very often. I just keep beng amazed by your way with emotions and reality. You write all that real life stuff in there but it's never boring or 'technical'. I can't remember the last time I bothered reading such a long fic, or this much fanfiction at all, for that matter. It's got nothing to do with the lemons either [though they're very well done]. I am completely absorbed in the plot, and your writing inspires me to work on my own Prince of Tennis fics. Actually I wrote a whole new one all because of this fic. I'm only up to chapter 48 or so, btw...

Oh, and speaking of, there's a chapter mislabelled Tezuka which is actually from Fuji's POV. It's the first in the series of Tezuka/Fuji chapter around the 40's mark. Just thought you should know.

And off I go to read some more.
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From ANON - Krystal_Epyon on November 07, 2006
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I'm at chapter 18 and I JUST realized this fic is 70 CHAPTER LONG!!!!!

I mean, not that that's a bad thing, but here I was thinking I could probably get through it tonight and then suddenly I notice the little scroll pad in the chapters button...

Oh, and for the record HOW could you throw that Tezuka chapter in right at that crucial point!? I'm going to have to go back and read it caus eI was completely caught up in Oishi/Eiji.

Oh, and as for my earlier review, you're everyday/dialogue writing has improved as the fic goes on, I'm happy to say. I'm also constantly awed by your ability to translate imagery to words, and also to make me believe what I wouldn't usually about characters: Such as Oishi being a bit of a playboy.

Nice job with Fuji, btw. I'm glad you haven't written him as a complete phsyco like most people.

And with that rambling, I have a LOT of reading to do...
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From ANON - Krystal_Epyon on November 06, 2006
>.< I'm only up to chapter 7 now but it's 7:45am. I've been reading since 4.

I think I can say honestly that this is one of the best fics I've ever read, and certainly the best of Prince of Tennis. Since I watched the show I've been searching for a good fic, in character, and not badly written. Thanks for finally ending my search.
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From ANON - Krystal_Epyon on November 06, 2006
I'm only at chapter two, but I just had to review!

Though the techinical aspects of your writing and some of the day to day stuff could use a little work, I find myself unable to care for the first time in a logn while. You've managed to cover the two aspects I find hardest very easily. I've never read such well described kisses, and the human thought patterns int his fic are wonderful!

A potentially uncomfortable situation was easy to read without cringing, and that's a huge feat! Then again, it is Kikumaru... :P

Okay, so this was a very round about way of saying it, but you've done a wonderful job so far, and I can't wait to read the rest!
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From ANON - bluebird on November 04, 2006
First of all thank you for writing so looong and heartwarming story. I got into pot universe something like a month ago and couldn�t find that kind of fics. Little too much sex for me, BUT it�s so well written! Write some books, why don�t you. Extrahug becauce your fics feature my faworite pairings. Tezuka got me into pot, but Eiji took me by storm^_^ Right now I�m in part 59 of Learning to fall. Keep up the good work! (Wawes hands around and goes to read more)
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From ANON - Nissie on August 10, 2006
I just finished chapter 26...sorry for not reviewing earlier. I just got caught up in the story ^^;

Wow, it's amazing how you've managed to create something like this! I was actually expecting drabbles or something, but some of these chapters are REALLY long! Fantastic ^_^

Lol, do many people know what NLP is, or do you get asked about it a lot by reviewers? Coincidentally, I just went to a sort of NLP camp-ish thing a few weeks ago, so it makes me smile to think Fuji uses it in this story.

I'm so glad about the whole reversi-ness of your fic! I don't really hate reading standard Seme!Oishi and Uke!Eiji, but versatility is just so much better ^_^ I feel so bad for Fuji, and I can't wait to read more on his and Tez's relationship! (Not that I'm no longer interested in Oishi and Eiji! Not at all! I just really want to see Fuji happy...and I think Tezuka can make him. So, yeah...)

Anyway, I'm totally hooked on your story! I wish I didn't have real-life stuff to do so I could just finish this and start reading L2L already! Meh, I've only watched up to epi 70 or something, so I might have to watch the rest before reading the sequel (there's no way I'm going to stop reading this, even if it'll spoil some stuff for me! *addicted*)

So...yeah. Thanks for writing this story! I'm really enjoying it!
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From ANON - Selphie fairy on January 05, 2006
My favorite GP fanfic ever! I love this su-chan! Viva the golden pair! :D
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From ANON - Sera on November 10, 2005
Wow! What an awesome story! And long too! I can't believe that it has so few reveiws, though... I guess not many people could finish it. You write amazing sex scenese, and this really made my day. I love watching the relationships develope! I's going to read Learning to Land right now!
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From ANON - \'Gumi on October 16, 2005
Wow. Wow. Wow. Just amazing. I don't know how it's humanly possible for someone to write 71 chapters to one fic, but you have done it. This was an amazing story and I can't wait to start Learning to Land. My friend referred this fic to me and I'm glad she did. Thanks for giving me a great way to waste my time. x3
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From ANON - Mezra (Gwahcola) on September 06, 2005
First off, I would like you to know that that was THE largest fanfiction I have EVER read. One of my own, personal fanfictions is currently 28 chapters long but... damn. 70 chapters... and they weren't that short, either! I can only wonder at your word count!

This was my first real, PoT fanfiction. Since I'm a pervert by nature (lol), I went straight away looking for a NC-17 one. I have never read so many lemons in one space of time, ROFL! There are a lot of firsts for me with this fanfiction! I'm glad it was the pairings I like - TezuxFuji and OishixEiji. I'm not a super big fan of switching roles (uke/seme) so much, but to each their own! You portrayed that rather nicely, and it didn't bother me as much as it might have.

The sap was a LITTLE strong in some parts (sometimes, I thought that trees have less sap than this story and that my teeth were going to start rotting) but... none the less, there were a lot of parts that made me smile or laugh. All in all, it was a good story and I'm glad I took the time (a lot of time, actually) to read it. I read it all in a day+ (with the exceptions of going to work, etc).

I'm excited to read Learning to Land because it has Inukai... muhuhuhuh...

But, seriously... I'm impressed that you were able to write and finish such a long story. O_o; Woooooah. I'm more impressed that I (who tends to be rather uppity and attention-deficient) could sit through it, even though it really only emcompassed about a months worth of time for the characters. (I'm guessing, there).

The only criticism I have is that sometimes, the writing style changes or switches mid-chapter. Was it written by more than one person? If so, GOOD JOB EVERYONE! But... specifically, here's what I mean.

Example:

Story will be going on and in this format: "Oishi felt happy that he was able to make Eiji smile, and they laughed." (Just a made up sentence).

Then, suddenly, the next paragraph will shift and it becomes: "Oishi feels happy that he was able to make Eiji smile, and they were laughing about it."

It's almost like the POV and the tenses changed... sometimes it through off the rhythm a little, because I couldn't understand why it shifted. But, regardless, I read on because it was a good story and good stories are worth even minor, grammatical aggravations!

Again, I like that the characters got together and I loved the beginning, when Oishi first kissed Eiji and was trying to teach him. That was super cute! I'm also glad that, uh, Tezuka and Fuji's relationship straightened out a bit more and they stopped being so dorky! (That's meant as a compliment to you, lol!)

SO... (this was a long-ass review)... what I'm trying to say is... I read every chapter (I'm sorry, I couldn't review every chapter because... well... I was too busy reading it!) I'm impressed with how much effort seems to have went into this story, and it was great because (I really am a pervert!) I liked having lemons every other chapter - rofl!

Thanks for helping me out with my very first PoT fanfiction and making it a good one... you should totally switch loyalties and come write for Gundam Wing! I'd support your fanfiction, yo! (...well, if it was 1x2, 3x4, 13x5...) If you ever write a 3x4 fanfic, let me know and I'll read it! (...well, if it ends happy because I like happy ends...) (...what's with all the if's?!)

Thanks! ^__^ You rock!
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From ANON - Lupercalia on August 17, 2005
WOW!!! This story was so amazing!!! ^_^ I loved how it was written, and how you developed each of the relationships, not just getting them all into one big orgy....although there's nothing wrong with that...(grins) I can't wait to read more so please keep on writting!!! You just made a huge fan! LOL
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