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By : Suteishichic

From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2008
^.^ Now that I finally have my laptop back...

Wow! Last chapter! That was sudden!

Still, I enjoyed it. The two new characters are rather interesting. I keep wondering if they're going to end up in Hyoutei together and suddenly pop out of the woodwork, but probably not, ne? Well, onto Learning to Play!
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From morbiDreamscape on February 12, 2008
Hmm... so, yes. I just wanted to review because I love the introspection and intertwined relationships between all the characters in this fic, and I'm stunned that you don't have more reviews for such a great story. Perhaps people are put off by the epic proportions of it... but I love it. Now that I read it all in one big rush, I have to wait just like everyone else for LtP. XD

I'd have to say that my favorite pairing in this fic is Shishido/Ohtori. There's just something so *insert babbling praise here* about it that makes my mind take a break from reality to just fangirl away.

The only slight complaint I have about the fic is that the characters have a tendency to... think... too much. It distracts from the storyline when they keep mentally drifting off and going on long tangents. Honestly, it's not that big of a problem, but by cutting out some unnecessary extras (such as the repetition of the same information), your story would become more focused and flow more smoothly.

That said, thank you so much for writing, and I love the depth you give to each character, where it's almost like meeting them for the first time and truly understanding where they come from. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next installment!
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From yellow22 on February 04, 2008
Sweet! a new chapter... new characters. yeah!
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From ANON - Anon on September 06, 2007
>.< Stupid Daily Moment of Downtime. Kicked in between writing my review and submitting it...

Anyway, I raved about the chapter as usual, expressed my intense curiosity at Renji's name being used (I'm dying to know if he's involved or if they had enough 'data' on Inui to use Renji against him), and I was delighted by the organized system that seems to be behind the against.

Oh yeah, and I feel sorry for Inui. Sounds like his jaw's broken. Ouch. (Along with plenty else.)

Can't wait for the next chapter. This is the first time I've been able to et my mind off of my up and coming exams and assignments all day.

Krystal_Epyon@yahoo.com
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From VanityBlake on September 03, 2007
YAY!!!! OMG you just totally made my day by updating this! This is my absolute favorite story on this website. You rock. Keep the updates coming, and you really deserve waaaay more reviews than you have (I'm sorry it took so long for me to get off my lazy ass and review)
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From ANON - Anon on May 26, 2007
Whew! Finally had a chance to read through the recent chapters. ^.^

Gakuto and Oshitari are as adorable as always. [By the way, I'm quite sure I can blame my obsession with Oshitari on this fic. :P]

But wow. Inui's mind is a scary, scary place... Far scarier than any tensai's.

On that note... Nicely done! I'm in awe. A little fearful, but definitely in awe of your ability to write him so well.

Well, I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Krystal_Epyon
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From Sharibet on May 20, 2007
Wow--what an intricate (and engrossing) story of intrigue, romance, and sexual politics. You have a real knack for characterizations, and I can't wait to see where you take this story next!
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From Bloodyfire on March 20, 2007
Wai!!1 This was so awsome!! ^_^ I loved these two chapters. they were so good and made me remember my love of fudomine.. it's been so logn sicne i watched or read prince of tennis. but after ym lesson I sat my ass downa dn re read a few chapters, and read the new ones. Oh I so hope that it's Inu/Kamio/Tachibana ^_^ that pairing is so smexy. Gosh I can't wait for the enxt chapters.
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From ANON - Anon on March 14, 2007
I should warn you that I am trying desperately not to curse right now...

WHY WOULD YOU TO THAT!? That's cruel! I neeeeeeed to know what happens! I must! It's a matter of life and death!

Is that not the home that Shinji uses when the others stay over? Doesn he break into someone else's house? Is he trying to hea dKamio off on the way? AHHH!!!!

And AWWWWWW! I was so hoping it would be Tachibana/Ibu, although it seems liek there's still room for Kamio to creep in there somewhere. :P

I'm so happy. ^.^ Shinji's so cute, and Tachibana is such a deary. ^.^

btw... ROTFL

He had seen Mori to Uchimura do this

I think you meant Mori and Uchimura. I just find it so funny cause I had a Japanese class this morning and accidently said something along those lines on the phone earlier.

Anyway... Wonderful two chapters. I simply can't wait for more - of any pairing, but especially this one. My curiosity has been peaked. ^.^

Why do I get the feeling Tachibana won't be calling Yasuo any time soon?
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From ANON - Anon on March 13, 2007
I wanna read this nooooooww!!!!! But I can't, cause I'm tiiiired. First chance I get [which may be a while cause it's gonna be a busy week] I'm reading these chapters, so just wait up for my review. ^.^
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From ANON - Krystal_Epyon on January 10, 2007
Oops! I missed the new Gakuto chapter. >.
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From ANON - Krystal_Epyon on January 09, 2007
Ooh! I do so hope Shishido gets to play!!!

*sighs* I'm really starting to hate Atobe, though, which is a shame. But I know he thinks he has good intentions.

Anyway, I can't believe I didn't notice this was updated. So, sorry for the late review.

ARGH! That damn Naomi! And that Yuri chick. >.< I'm dying with curiosity to know what's going on. And I keep wondering if there were bugs in Shiori's room that picked up the conversation in the closet.

Also, I can't help but wonder if Shiori took their hands off him to protect him rather than out of some claim. I guess I want to her to have some redemption considering that Atobe wanted her rather than Naomi.

Hmmm. I usualy don't so this, but: PLEASE update soooon!!! Update lots! XD I'm enjoying this Hyoutei arc very much, but at the same time I want to know what's goign on with Seigaku and with Tachibana and Yuuta and everyone! I want it all at once!

Oh, and I also wanted to thank you, because this story was originally responsible for the PoT writing streak I've been on, and these latest chapters have renewed my resolve to keep writing. If only cause I know how it feels to be dying for more. ^.^

Krystal_Epyon@yahoo.com
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From ANON - Nanaka on January 05, 2007
WOOO!!! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!! I'M SO HAPPY!! *DANCES AROUND THE ROOM* I LOVE THE STORY... KEEP UP TH GOOD WORK!!
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From ANON - Krystal_Epyon on December 09, 2006
Wow. I FINALLY got through all of this... Oh where to begin, what to say? Hmmm, each group individually, then...

Shishido/Ootori: AHHHH KAWAI!!!!!/fangirl mode. They're so sweet in this fic, even when Shishido is the opposite of sweet it's sweet. [If that makes ANY sense at ALL] I usually hate sweet, but... this is an exception. I'm dying to know who those three were. Shishido's twin, I'm guessing, the friend that had somethin to do with ice skating [is there even a friend or am I just making that up?] and Ootori's best friend? I guess I'll just have to keep hanging out for more. Heheheh. I usually can't stand Gakuto, but now I just want to see him and Shishido make up, though that's probably not going to happen. :P

On that note...

Gakuto/Oshitari: Muwahahaha! Tensai goodness. [Keep in mind that I'm terribly new to the fandom and haven't read many of these pairings before - at least not well done like this.] I'm loving it! I've gotten over my fear of that awful bowl cut so I can enjoy this fic. :P I'm going crazy trying to match up a timeline of these two couples in my mind, though. Shishido and Ootori are obviously way ahead. Oh, and what happened to the doubles practice with being tied together and all? Maybe my timeline jumping is getting me lost. >.< Honestly that's the only problem I have with this. Eventually I just gave up and started reading by POV rather than chapter.

Fuji Yuuta: I can't wait to see more of this. Those poor twins. Poor Yuuta. [Poor Fuji and Tezuka.]

Tachibana: Eheheheh. Fascinating. Truly. I want more of the present, though, with Kamio and Shinji and the others. As interesting as Tachibana's past is, I'm excited to see where this is going.

Atobe: At first I wanted so badly for him to get back together with Shishido, but you've done your job well. Now I want to see him live happily ever after with Jiroh. I'd love to see more from his point of view, and maybe even from Jiroh's. Oh! And that fight! Wassitabout!? I'm dying to know!!!

Heheheh. Poor angsty boys. Seems like they've all had a really hard time - and lets not forget about the Seigaku contingent.

Oh, speaking of... I wonder what this plan of Inui's is... and what's going to happen with poor Momo as it looks like Kaidoh and Inui will eventually pair off. ^.^

Well, I guess I'm moving onto that Valentines peice now, heheh... Hope to see and update, soon.

If you're in the practice of emailing: Krystal_Epyon@yahoo.com

If not, I'll just have to keep checking the slow way. :p

Oh, btw, I dedicated my fic Flavors of Cruelty to you as this fic is what spawned the idea in my head. No copyright infringement, I promise, just some good old typically screwed up Fuji.

Thanks for reviving my faith in fanfiction.
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From ANON - angelsofdeath on November 03, 2006
i LOVEEEEEEEE your storyy... it's soooo touchinggg!!!!!!!!! *sniff sniff*....there is still continue.....rite??????? please say yesssss...gambatte!!
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