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Reviews for Desires

By : kyoslover
  • From ANON - kupo on June 06, 2005
    That was soo hot!!!!! Your lemons are just as goon as the ones the older writers do. update soon
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  • From ANON - kae on June 06, 2005
    hmmmm haru and kyo on the roof could be fun.....
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  • From ANON - The Yaoi Fairy on June 06, 2005
    Bondage! Kyo, Haru and BONDAGE!!! Doesn't matter which one is tied up, just that one of them should, sometime, for a certain time, be tied up! And maybe Yuki could walk in on them! Or Shigure and/or Hatori and/or Yuki could be watching! That would be soooooo hot! Just imagining one of these situation makes me drool... and now I have to go masturbate (reading your story and imagining those things can do that to a girl (or a gay/bi guy)).

    You are such a great writer! (I wouldn't be able to write something like that with out having to at least fan myself between each chapter!)

    Update soon... (right now, imagine Shigure doing puppy dog eyes (I don't how anyone could resist him doing those eyes because he IS the zodiac's dog!))
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  • From ANON - Deneb on June 05, 2005
    It is a very good job for your first time writing guy on guy action. I really must publish my attempt like you did to see how good it was. Keep writing it is getting way interesting.
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  • From ANON - arielx on June 05, 2005
    heyur story is really good! i wish i could write in such good detail ! lol check out my adn rachelx's stroy its called affairs!
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  • From ANON - kupo on June 05, 2005
    I'm soo glad you decided to continue the story. ( The new lemon was great by the way) And you're right Rin and Tohru are really annoying!! Update soon
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  • From ANON - evilchild (not signed in) on June 04, 2005
    So there's going to be another chapter?

    I love a uke Kyo!! This is story is great! The format is sooo much better than the first chapter and a lot easier to read.
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  • From ANON - emerald eyes on June 04, 2005
    that's the way to think hatori! update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Lillyhawk on June 04, 2005
    I love it, you defenetly need to come out with the next chapter soon. Please. I love the pairing and am curious as to if your going to add more. Looking forward to it. =)
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  • From ANON - BakaDen on June 02, 2005
    Not too bad, not too bad at all. Indeed, I liked it, it was a nice read.^_^
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  • From ANON - kupo on June 01, 2005
    I've never seen that threesome before. It was really good! Do something new soon!
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  • From ANON - krysta on June 01, 2005
    i liked it. especially the pairings (hatori/kyo/shigure). its not one you see everyday.
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