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Reviews for In The Shadows, In The Light Arc

By : greywitch
  • From ANON - Blythe on October 30, 2005
    Just read the 14 chapters currently posted for the first time. I absolutely love your characterizations. Three primary players are well fleshed out and none of them are such utter bastards that the reader can't associate with them as they are in some stories. Also, Yohji's not stupid, which is nice for a change. Excellent writing, hope there's more!
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  • From ANON - Marasmine on October 25, 2005
    I love the way the characters and the story are developing. You are a genius. I was going to say that you can't do NaNo because you have to write more of this! Then I remembered that I am doing NaNo too, so I won't have time to read anything else. So good luck with NaNo and please get back to this on Dec 1! Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on October 25, 2005
    All i can say after reading playtime is HOT HOT HOT. But the interlude was so mysterious. i just love this storyline. i'm just
    dying to see where this will end. does bradley's vision means death for the trio or is it something more insidious. ooohhh, i'm
    just dying to know.
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  • From writeright on October 24, 2005
    I'd molest you, but there's that little problem of you not liking chicks. I think I'll just go molest myself or something instead. Loved the smut and the kink and the hint of something big to come. Squall's wisely not commenting on the statement about control freaks needing to be out of control in the bedroom.

    CP the horny
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  • From ANON - SexxiTwistedAngel on October 24, 2005
    ...the sex was great, then you walked out on us. Mann..what am I supposed to do from now till you finish Nano... I think that was the best bondage I've read...it certainly was very detailed, and very hot. That ending though...I knew it would have to end on a cliff, but man this is a HUGE cliff with no visible way down without anyone getting hurt. Oh man...I think it was the vision ending that's now got me craving for more so I can find out what happened. Very VERY effective ending that I'm almost mad that you used it, and you won't be updating for a while. Ah well...best of luck in nano and I hope to see you soon.

    Sexxi Twisted Angel
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  • From ANON - Glynwulf on October 14, 2005
    Great fic! Am dying to know what happens when the Cleaners show up. Please finish!
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  • From ANON - Kikvws on October 09, 2005
    This is freaking awesome! I adore you, I adore this fic...m'loving how you've keep up with the lemons, and just enough sweetness that it isn't too gag-worthy or too cold. *applauds* Wish there were more fics like this lil gem out there. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Harmony Glory on September 27, 2005
    Not a bad fic at all. I mean, the beginning was a little rough, as many fics tend to be, but as I continued to read the chapters, I found myself completely reeled into the story. It does help that I'm a sucker for a good threesome, and the Y/S/R threesome is one of my favs. Good luck with the next chapter. I'll definitely check this one out in the future. :)
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  • From ANON - Bishonen no Miko on September 27, 2005
    Ahh, another nice pair of chapters (I love the way you do that actually... it's like 2 updates for the price of one). So now Yohji's finally aware of his talents and is wreaking a bit of havoc with them... I like. Wasn't unexpected to find out that sex recharges him though... it's just so Yohji. And I loved Crawford's reaction when Schu revealed that little fact.
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  • From ANON - Apollo on September 26, 2005
    You wonderfully smutty dirty dog!

    --purrs happily-- That did wonders for stress relief!

    A marvelously well written chapter, from Yohji coming to grips with his Talent, to the make-up sex, to him recharging through sex! You are delightfully imaginative! It's a pleasure to have writers such as you on site! Thanks so much for your contributions....

    Apollo (Too lazy to sign in - Blame it on managing 40,000+ authors ^.^)
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on September 26, 2005
    oh yes you wrote.wow it was great can we have more please?
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on September 26, 2005
    That was too steamy for words. i've been dying to read the next chapters and i was
    excited to see your update. and i just bet that wall yohji has up has to do with that
    incident when crawford first met yohji as a kid. Right!!!!
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  • From ANON - SexxiTwistedAngel on September 25, 2005
    *grins* I love it when you update. It makes my day that much more enjoyable that I've read a good fanfic that I enjoy. Good Plot = Bonus!! I shall be waiting for the next update.
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  • From ArdwynnaMorrigu on September 25, 2005
    ROFL! Recharge Yohji, eh? Damn, but that makes for a really naughty situation. Now, boys, no sneaking off mid-battle for blow-jobs! I don't care if Yohji is all tuckered out. You've got bullets to dodge.
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  • From ANON - Kayla on September 04, 2005
    This fic is really getting interesting. I like how you are portraying the characters.
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