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Reviews for In The Shadows, In The Light Arc

By : greywitch
  • From ANON - LDG (Legendary Dream Girl) on June 14, 2005
    Another good chappie as usual. I'm so glad you leave German to english translation notes. Very helpful. Well, I can't wait for a new chapter and I hope there's a nice lemon scence in there. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Heta Noitio on June 14, 2005
    I loved this new interlude. *beams* I got scared when I saw the name "Brad" in the POV, but then it... It just changed. (I think that theory of 'cleaners' is great. It sounds like something Esset would do.) I hope that Brad and Schuldig can be friends again. Brad seems to be more human now.

    The new chapter... Well, all I can say is "Aya's mental world" and giggle madly. :D
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  • From ANON - Apollo on June 13, 2005
    In the true spirit of TRADITION: You dirty dog!

    There it was said, but I really don't have a reason to say it this time around. Things weren't really sexy enough to say it, though I always do love the masterbation bits. I did also like the insight into Aya's mind and how it affects them. The bit about Brad finding out is an interesting change, not quite sure what I think of that, especially the last part about him wanting to be friends. Dunno, can't wait to see what else happens!

    Apollo
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  • From ANON - kuyashinaki on June 13, 2005
    Like this so far. It's a bit early to review for my liking (I nearly never speak up before a story is finished ^_~), but as you seem to have a liking of letting Schu speak a bit of German I thought as a German I would lend you a hand.
    In chapter 3 you used "Verdorbenes gör" as a translation for "spoiled brat". Spoiled can be translated in several ways, but in this case it would always be "verzogenes Gör" rather than "verdorbenes". Also you always write "Gör" with a capitel G as it is a noun and nouns are capitalised in German.

    And to not just be a know-it-all and say some more nice stuff:

    I like the relationship the three share. It's very intense. And I like the story that is slowly developing. When I read chapter 1 I thought that it was hot, but I never really expected a story after starting out with a sex chapter, a pleasant surprise. I hope you'll keep that up ^^
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  • From ANON - Pix on June 10, 2005
    Man, I'm totally into threesomes lately. I'm thoroughly enjoying this whole dynamic and it's satisfying that boylove threeway that I've been needing lots of lately.

    Good job!
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  • From ANON - LDG (Legendary Dream Girl) on June 08, 2005
    Ah! A new chapter/story! Yay! ^_^ I'm so happy! Anyway I really liked the AyaxYohji lemon scene but I am dissapointed how they seem to be leaving out poor Schu and making him feel sort of...unwanted or needed. Is it just me? Maybe I'm just reading into the lines too much. Still loved the chapter though.
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  • From ANON - Bishonen no Miko on June 04, 2005
    Wow, thanks for continuing the story from Sharp & Guilty Pleasures. This is great... the world needs more Schu/Yohji/Aya action :) Definitely looking forward to more. Wondering how the teammates on both sides will react if/when they find out (especially Crawford!)
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  • From ANON - Sexxi Twisted Angel on June 03, 2005
    Heh heh...I like :D. *blink* Schu seems to have formed one of the telepathic connections with Aya and Yohji...sorta like the one that he sets up with the rest of Schwarz on missions. So cute.
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  • From ANON - Apollo on June 03, 2005
    You dirty dog...(It was just keeping in tradition)

    Two things -
    1) I was your first review --does the first review dance--
    2) I read it again....and again....damn, that was nicely done smut......
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  • From ANON - Apollo on June 03, 2005
    You dirty dirty god, I mean dog...Freudian slip....But damn it, I think if you keep churning out stuff like this I'll have to start all my reviews like that -.-

    It was wonderful...It was smut....It was wonderfully well written smut....

    Did I ever mention you are one of the few writers who can do Schu well? If not I'm saying it now.

    BTW - Did you find that beta on my board? If so, I wanna see if she's open when I complete my Weiss fic...Granted I don't know what the original product was like, but I sure as hell loved the finished one...So what do you think, can we share? It'll be kinky as all get out --grins evilly--
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