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By : kamorgana
  • From ANON - anubis on October 27, 2005
    hey! you've posted your story here that's great!!!!!! I was told by a friend about your story and I love them, your a great writer and am really amaze to know its not your native language. Keep up with the more that excellent work
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  • From ANON - L. Sith on October 14, 2005
    I like the Oniwabanshu arc of the story, and I can't wait to see if Saitoh will uncover the truth behind Mariko.
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  • From ANON - L. Sith on October 05, 2005
    The amount of effort that Okita uses to hide his illness adds a realistic but also sad touch to the story.
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  • From ANON - L. Sith on August 07, 2005
    Many unexpected turns, both romantic and political (for chapter 14)
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  • From ANON - L. Sith on August 05, 2005
    Good way to connect Okita and the Oniwanbanshu. Great observation from Okita about Aoshi.
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  • From ANON - Sith on August 05, 2005
    “Though I understand why you are. I can only be thankful that you didn’t have the idea to observe him in the bathhouse yet…”

    LOL
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  • From ANON - Sith on August 03, 2005
    “Though I understand why you are. I can only be thankful that you didn’t have the idea to observe him in the bathhouse yet…” LOL. Excellent line
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  • From ANON - L. Sith on July 26, 2005
    Aiko makes for a great scape goat. The chapter adds more mystery to the crazy girl
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2005
    simply, AWESOME!! i iove the way u find out the real facts about japan and such, unlike many who throws in watever they feel like. also im amazed that u managed not to make tokio and saitou out of character as they are some of the hardest character to stay in character.
    Congratulation on finishing this wonderful piece of story.

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  • From ANON - pianogoddess on July 03, 2005
    Wow, this is one of the best fic's I've ever read! This is a very well written fic and the research and history you put into it are amazing!! I hope to see more of your work in the future. :o)
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  • From ANON - Sith on June 19, 2005
    The scene in the bath is very high tensioned, and it keeps the reader guessing. Very suspenseful.
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  • From ANON - Viki on June 19, 2005
    Your driving me crazy.This story is great, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sith on June 18, 2005
    "We can continue our conversation in a more… intimate environment, then. So, until next time, *Tokio*-san.”
    An excellent line. Trust Saitoh to turn a disadvantage into an advantage.
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  • From ANON - Firuze on June 05, 2005
    Saitou's inner monologue after the "news" of his upcoming marriage is delicious.

    The scene at the temple, just perfect. The intrigue level, excellent. Did I say I love your fics?
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  • From ANON - Firuze on June 05, 2005
    "Saitoh shrugged, thinking inwardly that he wouldn’t call the man who would marry the little witch lucky, but irremediably doomed."

    Poor dear... if he only knew what was hoovering above his head... Mwhahaha... YEAH! Saitou torture!

    I detest Michiko absolutely. She is... I don't know... but I alays had this despise for people who think they are superior because of their social status. I understand, it's quite typical for the age and place, but watching Matsudaira and the other nobles, it makes her less sympathetic.

    Also, the way you play with misunderstandings and how they play on each other nerves is great. I love his reactions!

    This part is particularly delicious:

    "Wait a second. That wasn’t his bad luck, but hers. He smirked dirtily. They were alone, hidden from the view of the guests, and the reception was extremely noisy. It was probably the moment to have that little word with her…

    “Captain Saitoh,” she addressed him, with a hostility not hidden by her sweet tone. “Trying to avoid your duties, hiding in the garden?”

    …or better, just to put his hands around her throat and to squeeze it slowly, until she begged and apologized."

    If only Sano knew years later... Mwahahahaha...

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